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Charlotte and the Fairies
'Charlotte and the Fairies is a beginning chapter book for children written by Wendy Beasley and illustrated by Rose Wheeler. Charlotte is a little girl who has just moved to a new house that has its own special inhabitants and a mystery too. Charlotte and her pet dog, Morgan and Billie the Budgie make some new friends that one has to believe on two adventures. She is also a little girl who wants to help a friend. 'Charlotte and the Fairies is a story of friendship and getting over fears that one may have to solve certain problems that may have to solve in one's short life. It is quite the imaginative story.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Pre-cursor to doom. Content Warning.
I woke up to a thunder storm early hours of the 8th day of October poured myself a generous glass sat down turned on the TV & news flash that made me nearly tip my glass of its contents then sat up after regaining balance.
By Henry Okonkwo2 years ago in Critique
the gifts
Gifts from my parents, like my first heavy bag and wraps, often came as solutions to what was given to me in far more precious and formative years. They bought stuff to solve the problems that came with these early, less material gifts. I remember most fondly the Everlast blend of poly-foam in leather that hung from the basement of my childhood home. It was a later offering to temper The Rage–one of Mother’s first gifts to me.
By kp2 years ago in Critique
Killers of the Flower Moon
During the 1920s, a vile plot unfurled in the core of the US, a plot that would perpetually scar the historical backdrop of the Osage Local American clan. This dim part in American history shapes the setting of Martin Scorsese's most recent realistic magnum opus, "Killers of the Flower Moon. The film depends on a genuine story and highlights a remarkable cast including Leonardo DiCaprio, Robert De Niro, and Lily Gladstone. In this article, we'll dive into the film's depiction of its characters and its strong investigation of affection, double-crossing, and the progression of time.
By R Roka2 years ago in Critique
The Most terrible Film I've At any point Seen
Introduction In the realm of film, there are exemplary showstoppers, dearest clique movies, and afterward there are the motion pictures that make an imprint for every one of some unacceptable reasons. "Catwoman" (2004) is irrefutably one of the last options, a realistic train wreck that stands as perhaps of the most terrible film I've at any point had the mishap of review. Featuring Halle Berry as the lead protagonist, this film endeavored to revive the Catwoman character from DC Comic books however wound up biting the dust. In this article, we will dig into the motivations behind why "Catwoman" is broadly viewed as a fiasco that would blow the mind of any average person.
By R Roka2 years ago in Critique
The Hunting of Hollow Hill. Content Warning.
In the quiet town of Hollow Hill, nestled between rolling hills and dense forests, a mysterious legend had persisted for generations. Whispers of a hidden treasure buried deep within the heart of the woods had been passed down from one curious soul to another. The townsfolk spoke of an ancient map, said to be the key to unlocking the secrets of unimaginable wealth. And so, the legend of the Hollow Hill treasure became a beacon for treasure hunters and adventure seekers.
By Nabila Nazir2 years ago in Critique
A choice between jazz-critique my piece please!
eeee squeaks and shuffling of shoes on shiny brown floors heeee…hooooo deep breathing behind me the rhythm and vocalness of it makes me know it’s intentional.
By Jay,when I write2 years ago in Critique
The Exorcist (2023): Believer
In the realm of repulsiveness film, not many names convey as much weight as "The Exorcist." Coordinated by William Friedkin and delivered in 1973, the first film stays a magnum opus in the class. Its effect on the business and mainstream society couldn't possibly be more significant. At the point when news broke that David Gordon Green, known for his work on the new "Halloween" establishment passages, would steerage a rethinking of "The Exorcist," assumptions ran high. In any case, subsequent to review the film, obviously this rendition misses the mark regarding the imprint.
By R Roka2 years ago in Critique
Critique request
I need some critique and feedback on an old poem; looking to enter for publication soon! Don't hold back!
By Jazzy 2 years ago in Critique
Saw X: The tenth Portion Restores the Tradition of Jigsaw
Saw X is the tenth Saw film that has a X in the title since it's way cooler to say 'X' than '10'. This film denotes a huge re-visitation of the contorted universe of Jigsaw, with Tobin Ringer repeating his notorious job as John Kramer. While not precisely a prequel, it happens after the primary Saw yet before the second, procuring it the title of "Saw 1.5." In this portion, we dig further into John Kramer's personality, investigating his own excursion and moral code.
By R Roka2 years ago in Critique
The Male-Female Dynamic
In a world where TV shows often portray the normalcy of boys and girls forming deep friendships, questions arise about the true nature of these relationships. Some view them skeptically, fearing they may evolve into something more than just friendship, perhaps akin to 'friends with benefits.' Throughout our lives, we've been taught that men and women have distinct responsibilities and roles, an idea deeply ingrained in society. However, this perspective becomes confining when men insist that a girl can be their best friend and that this friendship can be as pure as that between two female friends. In my piece, I aim to explore the nuanced dynamics between men and women, a topic I will delve into in detail. Recently, I've come across evidence that sheds light on how destructive such male-female friendships can be. I know someone who had to bear the consequences of considering a man his best friend, only to discover that the man viewed her as a romantic interest while pretending to be just a friend. This experience has led me to question whether true platonic friendship is achievable between the sexes.
By Madiha Masood2 years ago in Critique
The Creator
Welcome to my review for the new film, "The Creator." The ban has quite recently dropped for full audits, and I'm eager to have my interpretation of this true to life jewel out there. " The Creator" is helmed by chief Gareth Edwards, denoting his re-visitation of the big screen since " Rogue One: A Star Wars Story" back in 2016. Edwards co-composed the screenplay with Chris Whites, a credited essayist on "Rebel One" and an Oscar candidate for "About a Kid." In a scene overwhelmed by spin-offs, variations, and previous properties, unique motion pictures are a unique case. " The Creator" remains as a strong special case, offering an entirely remarkable and unique idea.
By R Roka2 years ago in Critique