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Beach Music
Pat Conroy has written a family novel entitled 'Beach Music'. This is the story of a man named Jack McCall the first-born son of Lucy McCall Pitts. He has four other brothers all with their own quirks to live with and deal with their mother's illness. Jack at the start of the story is living in Rome with his young daughter Leah and he has noticed that he has had a follower. 'Beach Music' will cover the decades through various stories told by his friends from the sixties about his and his friends' activities, as well as stories from his friends' parents from the Depression to the World War to Vietman. It is also a story of nature and how to deal with climate change. 'Beach Music' is a novel that will have you laugh and cry sometimes at the same time.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
The Great 3 a.m. Artistic Reckoning
Ah, the classic 3 a.m. existential crisis is when your brain revisits your past creative endeavours and questions your sanity. We've all experienced a moment when your inner critic wakes up, stretches, and says, "Hey, remember that poem you publicly wrote to your future husband or about limerance? Yeah, that was a choice."
By Musulyn M (MUSE)2 years ago in Critique
Our Flag
What does it mean to fly the flag? The flag is the symbol for enduring freedom for all. Flying the flag on the Fourth of July, Flag Day or any other patriotic day shows that one cares for their country and to those who have served to protect it from invaders. The flag that shows in its' stars and stripes how proud we citizens are for what we have. The flag is a symbol of honor, so let it fly high in the sky.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
The Fourth of July
Happy Fourth of July!!!! This is the day that America celebrates our independence of England oh so long ago. Now it is the holiday that we celebrate veterans of all wars from the Revolution through Desert Storm and ones still going on in some ways. It is a day of picnics, games and at night fireworks.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Exploring the themes of woman empowerment through Netflix's Trigger Warning
Exploring the themes of woman empowerment through Netflix's Trigger Warning As we evolve into the changing nuances of contemporary cinema, the stereotypical portrayals of women as passive and nurturing abodes for their masculine figures have seen a new light with female representation as thought-provoking leaders and competent individuals who are no damsels in distress waiting for their saviours. Netflix’s recent movie Trigger Warning, starring Jessica Alibi, is a similar hard-hitting tale. Jessica Alba channels her inner maverick as she plays a serving U.S. military officer who must return home after a tragic incident. Despite the film's excellent craftsmanship, some of its subtleties revert to the same clichés that can be found in other Hollywood productions. Let's examine the themes of women's empowerment that the movie explores in more detail.
By Hridya Sharma2 years ago in Critique
The Rifleman
'The Rifleman' starring Chuck Conners was a television western about Lucas McCain and his son Mark in the town of North Fork near Laramie. In each episode there was a lesson to learn whether for an adult or a child. I remember the beginning when Lucas is slowly walking shooting the rifle rapid fire with Chuck Conners staring at the camera. This was a series that was before my time, but I have seen a few reruns from time to time. It was a series that followed a particular sequence from episode to episode. There is a crime and investigation of sorts and a solution sought after and a decision made.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Valley of the Dinosaurs
Back in the day on Saturday mornings in the late seventies there were various kinds of programs from the normal cartoon to live action programs. There was a cartoon that I remember entitled 'Valley of the Dinosaurs' a cartoon about the Butler family and their trip of exploration into the prehistoric past. The cartoon was well-detailed in depicting the Butler family and the cave family they encountered and their surroundings from the flora to the fauna (dinosaurs). There were lessons to learn about cooperation and accepting others for who they are.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
An open letter to my friend and soul character, Monica.
An open letter to my friend and soul character, Monica. Someone who overthinks is also someone who overloves. Ahh! that quote hitd the heart in the same way cupid strikes his dart. Monica Geller, the super organized, super smart, classy woman, you have always been the backbone of your group, the one whom everyone would turn to when in need, or when they needed a shoulder to cry on. Family is the safe place that shields you from the animosity of the outer world. It helps you build your self-image and creates a sense of belonging.
By Hridya Sharma2 years ago in Critique
The one when Joey Tells Rachel
I am falling in love with you! I don’t get it! I said I am falling in love with you. The very noteworthy scene between Rachel and Joey in the most-watched sitcom friends tells us about love. The very fact that Joey fell love in with Rachel has contradictory reactions from the audience. Joey and Rachel have been friends for several years, and friendship is something that comes with its rules and regulations, its ups and downs. Humans are contracted beings, the ones who take everything for granted when it comes easy.
By Hridya Sharma2 years ago in Critique
From Eye Candy to Mind Boggler: Unveiling the Puzzling Narrative of "Anyone but You
From Eye Candy to Mind Boggler: Unveiling the Puzzling Narrative of "Anyone but You The visual appeal of exotic locations and captivating yet stimulating romantic comedies has always been soaring for decades. The audience loves an escape from their mundane lives into a whirlwind of romance, with heartwarming plots and a sizzling chemistry. Anyone But You sets the bar high when it comes to a visually appealing storyline and the ensemble, yet falls flat with its plot, leaving the audience contemplating and uninterested as the story unfolds. Much Ado About Nothing by William Shakespeare is said to be the inspiration for the movie Anyone But You. That may or may not be the case, though, as Shakespeare's entire body of work has become imbued with archetypal meanings—just as every detective has some debt to Sherlock Holmes. Let's get straight to this rom-com and discuss the various nuances of this film
By Hridya Sharma2 years ago in Critique
Adult Coloring Books
I really appreciate all the reads and comments I have received on my Color art pictures that I have done in a few adult coloring books that I have shared. Along with some of my original art drawings. I mainly wanted to share that I have published several adult coloring books on the site known as 'artwanted.com'. I have print and PDF versions of my books there. If you happened to be interested, go to the site and click 'BROWSE' and type my name. They are all pencil sketches in the coloring books. I also have a gallery of my artwork posted there as well. You can even buy them if you would like to. They are drawn using markers, crayons and stylus computer icons. Please comment.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
