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Book reviewing
For the past few years, I have been a volunteer book reviewer for several online sites. Honestly, I was looking for a paid position to review books for say Publisher's Weekly and a few other companies, but they have never let me know one way or another. Being a book reviewer, one learns a lot and it does get lonely at times as does being a freelance writer but that does not bother me. Books are great company for me. Books are our friends.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Cody Ko's Allegations Are really bad like bad bad.
Whenever I get to YouTube it seems that Cody Ko has been covered by some of the biggest reputable Youtube community for past days since a youtuber D'angelo wallace made a very compelling video about Cody Ko's past and this time its something that is not that positive because the kind of allegations he that has propped up is something that can really kill or end a Youtuber's career given that we have seen such examples like Dr Disrespect been dragged by the online community of his past weirdo behavior.
By Prince of kent2 years ago in Critique
Is Cybersecurity Boring or Fun? 🤔
In the realm of technology, the field of cybersecurity often sparks a lively debate: is it boring or fun? The answer to this question can vary wildly depending on one's interests, personality, and career aspirations. Let's delve into the different aspects of cybersecurity to better understand its appeal (or lack thereof).
By Tech Focus Pro2 years ago in Critique
Secrets of Top Selling Agents
Here is an academic book that is about real estate agents and how they made it big in that business. This is a book written by Joe Sesso and how that all the keys to success in real estate can be used in many other professions as well. He was able to share many other secrets from famous agents. One needs to know how to organize, communicate and find out where they fit in and find their niche. This is a fast read and you will be able to use a lot of the bullet points that he has shared.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Butterflies
"Butterflies" is a page from an adult coloring book. I used crayons to fill in the designs. This could be a worksheet for preschool or kindergarten children or even could be used in a special education classroom. The children can count and match the colors of each butterfly. How many orange butterflies? How many blue butterflies? Count the antennas of all the butterflies. It could also lead to a nature/science lesson. Please comment.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
person
'person' is a pencil sketch that I did trying to show action of some kind. It is a sketch using my version of Cubism using cubes, squares, triangles and rectangles of various sizes. I see a person trying to throw a ball of sorts. I wonder what you see and I hope to read some comments that I would truly appreciate. I have more pictures and color art posted here on Vocal in ART and CRITIQUE. If you are interested in seeing more of my artwork I have published several coloring books and an art book at 'artwanted.com'.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Soulmate
'Soulmates' is another part of this 'Dark World' series by L.J. Smith. This is the story of Hannah and Thierry and Maya. Hannah believes that she is not going to see her seventeenth birthday and she needs to know why. She goes to a psychologist, and they do hypnosis that they think will help. This is a story that involves vampires, humans and werewolves and once again try to bring all these factions together to live in peace. Is that going to be possible?
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
The Chosen
Here is another story entitled 'The Chosen'. It is also part of the 'Night World' series by L.J. Smith. In 'The Chosen' this is the story of Rashel, who is a vampire hunter and seems to have an attraction to a vampire who says that they are soulmates. Rashel must find a way to bring humans, vampires, witches, and other night world persona together. This story is also a fast-paced story and you can see the story unfolding.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Dark Angel
This novel is a part of a bigger series known as 'Night World'. This series is written by L.J. Smith and the first one is entitled 'Dark Angel'. 'Dark Angel' is the story of Gillian and how she sees herself in this life with the good and the bad and would anyone really miss her. She is out walking to school when she hears a noise like someone crying or something. She follows the noise her life changes and meets 'an angel' or is it. The story moves along a nice pace and keeps you reading.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
What Happens If an Astronaut Floats Off During a Spacewalk?
What Happens If an Astronaut Floats Off During a Spacewalk? Space exploration has always captured human imagination, and the image of an astronaut floating freely in the vast expanse of space is both mesmerizing and terrifying. The reality of spacewalks, officially known as Extravehicular Activities (EVAs), involves meticulous planning and stringent safety measures. However, the question remains: what happens if an astronaut floats off during a spacewalk?
By robail shahzadi2 years ago in Critique










