Essay

Titch
'Titch' a children's story written and illustrated by Pat Hutchins that is a story of siblings working together. Titch is the baby brother to Mary and Pete. These three are out complete a project. This story will teach all about size for Pete has big things, Mary has medium things, and Titch has very small things. The moral of the story is the small things can bring things together. This is a very short story for beginning readers and could lead to children comparing themselves to others or learning more about size in many ways and being able to understand.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Gregg shorthand
There is a course that I had in high school known as Shorthand I and yes, I took a class that was all girls back in the early 1980's, but I knew or at least at the time that I wanted to be a writer, and I read that shorthand would be good to know. I wasn't the fastest, but I did achieve 60 WPM give or take a few words. It was a course that reviewed vocabulary as well as grammar. It was alway like learning to write all over again just like writing cursive and it is pretty.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Owen
'Owen' is a children's story written and illustrated by Kevin Henkes. This is the story of a little mouse named Owen who loves his blankey very much. His parents do not seem to mind till a nosy neighbor says something about Owen and is blanket. The parents have to figure a way to help Owen. This is a good story to share with children when they need to give something up or a way. The pictures are really cute and uses colors that make you enjoy the story just like the children you could teach from this children's story now.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Love
What is love? In reading Rick Warren's book 'The Purpose Driven Life' there's a chapter that has something to ponder-Life is all about Love. Is it? We are all in various kinds of relationships some good, some bad and some we just know yet. It is also a way of showing and doing good for someone as one of my favorite Bible verses which is 'Love Thy Neighbor as you do yourself'' or something like that. I was never that good at memorizing verses of any kind. So, to show love one still must be forgiving, honest and family oriented.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Genogram
I am reading a textbook entitles 'Genogram'. This is one of the textbooks that I had to read when I thought I wanted to be a Family therapist. Now I am re-reading it and still it is a good book even reading about historical families from all eras. The reason that I am re-reading this is one is in the hopes of writing a few articles for an educational magazine that I have has a few articles published a few years ago. The main objective of the textbook is to see the reasons why some family issues occur over time.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Dancing with Shadows
There’s a unique tension in the silence of a blank page. It’s not just the absence of words, but the weight of all the ideas that refuse to materialize. Writer's block isn't merely a lack of inspiration—it’s the daunting feeling of being lost in a fog, knowing that something powerful is waiting to be uncovered, but unable to grasp it.
By CAVEABDUL about a year ago in Critique
My Calling
In reading Rick Warren's, The Purpose Driven Life book there was a passage that struck me. It is about what we are to do for God, and I believe that my writing is my way of doing service to and for the Lord. For at times, I feel like I am teaching and helping others in a way even in fun ways at times. Could writing be my purpose for living here on earth even though I was a nurse and teacher still helping in a physical way. I feel like I am serving God as a writer very truly.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
A Rainbow Story
When I see any rainbow, I am getting a visit from my mom and dad and brother. They have come for a visit even though it will probably be a short one just as long as the rainbow is bright, I close my eyes and just look for there they are smiling and waving. I say "Hi, love you, miss you." Sometimes I feel like at times I wish I could go be with them, but it is not my time and ask in a way 'When are you guys coming to pick me up.' Waiting for an answer. When?
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Over the Rainbows
What do you suppose could be at the ends of double rainbows? To me there could be anything, but I do not believe in a physical 'pot of gold', but my gold would be gaining more faith in what I believe. The pot of gold to me also means that seeing things work out personally and professionally. Some people make their wish on the pot of gold probably for more money or some physical aspect in and for their lives. For me a double rainbow means security in my faith and beliefs of who and what I am in Jesus.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Is Everything a Test?
Reading Rick Warren's book 'A Purpose Driven Life' at the end of Chapter five there is a question--What has happened to me really has only been a test? Then when someone who probably does not even realize how they stated some words about me doesn't realize through my actions that I have shown really seems not to matter even though I was taught when certain words were uttered in haste were what that person really meant. I still find it hard to be around the person that said what was said. I do send smiles and heart emojis to them.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
My Purpose, I think...
What is my purpose? I am re-reading Rick Warren's 'The Purpose-Driven Life' for the third time. It hit me in Chapter four my purpose is writing for I worked as a nurse and even a teacher I feel more that I am fulfilling my purpose as a writer. Through writing I am sharing what I have learned and what I am learning. I know when I die even though I feel like I will still be down here on Earth trying to guide others somehow I know God and Jesus is with me in all I am here one Earth.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
The Pumpkin Patch
Oh, what lurks in this field of pumpkins so near the day of All Hallows Eve. The sun comes up just as it always does but moves just a bit faster it seems, and the dusk just seems to last a little longer. Suddenly the moon just appears huge and full. One just walks around and seems weary and not knowing why. One remembers then on their walk around the pumpkin patch that there is a special being this time of year. Could it be, could it be. Oh, yes could be The Great Pumpkin, Charlie Brown. Only just believe.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique