Critique

Horse And Donkey
Horse And Donkey Once Upon A Time In A Village, There Was A Man Who Owned A Farm. He Had A Horse And A Donkey. A Horse Always Gets Good Food. But The Donkey Did Not Get The Same Care And Food. So The Donkey Always Had A Mental Breakdown.
By ASHOKKUMAR2 years ago in Art
That @&%# Fabric
You ever have something that haunts you? No, I really mean it – something that follows you, every single stinking place you go, you see it out of the corner of your eye, flickers of it in the subway, every building you pass?
By Meredith Harmon2 years ago in Art
The Unseen Thread. Content Warning.
In the quaint town of Eldridge, nestled between rolling hills and serene meadows, lived a woman named Emma. Eldridge was known for its sense of community, where everyone knew their neighbors and gatherings were a common occurrence. But Emma was different; her work required her to be connected to the world through a screen, and her job allowed her to contribute to projects far beyond the town limits.
By Luise Andjamba2 years ago in Art
Embracing Unity through Islamic Calligraphy: A Tale of Art, Brotherhood, and Cultural Enrichment.
In a poignant display of solidarity, Amir Mir, the Provincial Minister for Information & Culture, shared his heartfelt reflections at a recent calligraphy contest hosted by the Iranian Cultural Centre in Lahore. The event not only served as a platform for celebrating the intricate art of Islamic calligraphy but also as a testament to the enduring bond of brotherhood between Pakistan and Iran.
By Samiha Bushra 2 years ago in Art
The Cursed Vault. Content Warning.
Once upon a time, in the mystical kingdom of Elodia, there lived a young prince named Anne Boleyn. The kingdom was known for its enchanting landscapes, towering castles, and a rich history of royal families. Anne, however, was different from the typical princes of Elodia. He possessed a keen intellect and a curiosity that often led him to explore the hidden corners of the kingdom.
By Scott Lewis2 years ago in Art
iZotope Neutron 4 Mixing Plug-in Suite "Download" . Content Warning.
Neutron 4: Your Sonic Command Center - iZotope's Mixing Mastery Unleashed Embark on a transformative mixing journey with iZotope's Neutron 4 Mixing Plug-in Suite, the epitome of precision and innovation in audio production. This comprehensive suite is meticulously designed to empower musicians, producers, and engineers with a suite of cutting-edge tools that redefine the art of mixing.
By Extra Plugins2 years ago in Art
Is The American Dream Really Dead?
Welcome, readers, to a journey through the American Dream. We will demystify this concept and explore if it still exists in modern society. Is the American Dream a vibrant goal or just an illusion? Let's separate fact from fiction.
By A.O2 years ago in Art
Vocal I'm Home
It’s been too long since I’ve written a story. 2023 had me pressed in a ball so tightly wound I could not open my chest cavity for air. It was rough. To describe it all in one sentence, one paragraph or one book would be just as difficult. So, instead I think I’ll warm up and show some overall appreciation for the platform (without bias). When I first joined the Vocal community almost three years ago, it was on the rise. There were not nearly as many options on the drop-down list and maybe five hundred thousand artists/creators including myself. It reminded me of a blog the way the format was set up, but was comforting to the user, and the way to make money was simple even a snail with arms could participate and get something out of it. I wrote my first and most read story back then. My Friend Death was the title, and the story is about a suicidal person that has had enough of life and is giving themselves up. The image you are supposed to see in your mind is that person you know that ended everything so soon from their point of view. I won’t go into much detail (that’s not what this is about) but they published it! To my surprise they really published it. With so many platforms attaching themselves to the first amendment at the hip, but immediately severing the connection as soon as they start to grow, I found that spectacular. The thought went through my head “I can actually say what I think and feel here” which is unheard of especially now going into 2024.
By Tetrenius2 years ago in Art
sports
Sports: Sport pertains to any form of physical activity or game, often competitive and organized, that aims to use, maintain, or improve physical ability and skills while providing enjoyment to participants and, in some cases, entertainment to spectators. Playing is very important for the body. It is important to play because. However, our mental health should be fine and we should also maintain it. The more we play, the more our body will sweat, however, will prevent many diseases from our bodies. Exercise increases the strength of our body but discipline is very important in games.
By nikhal rana2 years ago in Art
"Whispers of the Moors". Content Warning.
Title: "Whispers of the Moors" The moors, with their vast expanse of heather-covered hills and hidden hollows, held secrets as ancient as time itself. Nestled within their undulating contours was a village called Dunbridge, a place where tradition and folklore intermingled with the everyday lives of its inhabitants. In the heart of Dunbridge stood a centuries-old manor, imposing and enigmatic, known as Moorcroft Manor.
By Kuldeep Rajawat2 years ago in Art
Leave The World Behind. Movie Review.
"Leave The World Behind" stars Julia Roberts, Ethan Hawke, Kevin Beacon and Mahershala Ali and is directed by Sam Esmail. The movies plot is an attempt to make sense of today's basic amenities of technology breaking down as the characters desperately try to figure out why.
By Robert M Massimi. ( Broadway Bob).2 years ago in Art
Dance of Existence
In the dim glow of a small, crowded comedy club, a storyteller named Sarah stood on stage, her voice echoing with the wisdom she had gleaned from the words of Dave Chappelle. The audience leaned in, captivated by her tale that unfolded the delicate balance between dreamers and dreams.
By Cipher God'seye2 years ago in Art