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The Clockmaker's Secret

In a quiet village, a mysterious ticking unveils the lost truth of time and love

By Syad UmarPublished 9 months ago 3 min read

In the small village of Hemsbury, nestled between misty hills and old forests, lived an elderly man named Elias Finch. Known to all simply as "the Clockmaker," Elias ran a modest shop on the edge of town filled with ticking, whirring wonders—grandfather clocks, pocket watches, cuckoos, and gear-driven marvels. Though his craft was exquisite, he was an enigma: never married, seldom seen outside, and always working past midnight by candlelight.

The villagers whispered stories about him: that he once stopped time to save a lover; that he had a secret room where time ran backward. No one truly knew him, yet everyone respected his presence.

One rainy evening, just before closing, a young girl named Lila wandered into Elias’s shop. She was drenched and trembling, holding a broken locket-watch.

“My father gave this to my mother before he died,” she said softly. “It’s stopped ticking… I was hoping maybe…”

Elias, without a word, took the delicate piece into his hands. His old eyes, still sharp, peered closely. He nodded and gestured to a wooden chair near the fire. “It’ll take time,” he said in a gravelly voice.

As the minutes passed, Lila watched him. The walls were covered in strange clocks, some shaped like birds, others like stars. Each ticked at a different rhythm, none synchronized. One clock ticked backward.

“Why are your clocks all different?” she asked.

Elias smiled faintly. “Because time isn’t the same for everyone.”

She frowned. “Is that a riddle?”

He paused his work. “No, child. It’s truth. A moment can feel like an eternity… or a lifetime can pass in a blink.”

Lila looked away. “I wish I could turn time back… to before Mama got sick.”

Silence filled the room except for the ticking.

Elias handed her the fixed locket. “Open it,” he said.

Inside, not only was the watch ticking again, but a faded photograph shimmered with new clarity. Her father, young and smiling, held a baby wrapped in a blanket. Lila gasped.

“This picture… it was worn out. How did you fix that?”

“I didn’t,” Elias said simply. “The watch did.”

Suddenly, the largest clock on the wall chimed—loud and deep, though it wasn’t the hour. All the clocks stopped. The shop grew eerily quiet.

Lila looked around, confused. “What’s happening?”

Elias stood, reaching behind the counter and pulling out an old, dusty journal. He handed it to her. “Time is offering you a chance. One moment. One truth.”

Lila opened the journal. Pages flipped on their own, stopping on an entry written in delicate ink:

"October 13th, 1893. She left me today. Said time kept us apart. So I built this place. Not to stop time—but to remember it, to understand it… maybe to change it."

A tear slid down Lila’s cheek.

“You loved someone too, didn’t you?” she whispered.

Elias nodded. “But I spent more time trying to master time… than being with her.”

The clocks began ticking again, all in perfect harmony.

“What should I do?” Lila asked.

He touched her shoulder gently. “Go home. Tell your mother the stories your father told you. Laugh with her. Love her. The time you have—make it count.”

She nodded, eyes bright.

As she stepped out into the now-clear night, the stars above blinked like clock hands turning. She glanced back, but the shop seemed… older. Dustier. The door creaked, but when she tried to open it again, it was locked.

Years passed. Lila grew up, became a writer, and often told the story of the strange clockmaker who could fix time. The shop remained closed, its windows fogged, its door sealed. Some said Elias passed away. Others believed he simply vanished—his time fulfilled.

One day, long after Lila had a child of her own, her daughter found an old locket-watch tucked away in a drawer. It still ticked.

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Syad Umar

my name is umar im from peshawer

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