You Are Bleeding
If you need help , Ask For It and Care For Yourself
We Read
We Write
We Chat
But You Are Bleeding
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We Play
We Listen
We Talk
But You Are Bleeding
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We Want
To Hug
To Hold
But You Are Bleeding
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Apart
We Are
Apart
But You Are Bleeding
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We Must
We Must
We Will
Stop The Bleeding
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Bandage
And Clean
The Wound
Stop The Bleeding
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Make You
Better
Hold You
Stop The Bleeding
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We Hold
We Kiss
We Smile
Bleeding Stopped
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We Read
We Write
We Chat
We Talk
We Hold
We Kiss
We Stopped The Bleeding
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The music is the title track from the wonderful King Charles album "Loveblood" and was sort of appropriate for this poem.
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Love this poem!