Tangled Destinies Poem: Mayday Remix‼️💃🏾🕺🏾💘
~Remixed Love Poem/50 Word Edition~
Our destinies danced the tango before I even had time to think... 💃🏾💖
MAYDAY‼️‼️‼️‼️ The guard on my heart is beginning to shrink… 🛟🔓
This half-century-old maiden is feeling love-drunk, and I don't even drink... 🚫🍸
May the skies above the mountains that we both move together always glow heavenly pink... 🗻💒
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Tiffany Gordon
I am a super-spiritual, fun-loving artist, writer, & peer-counselor residing in the Pacific Northwest. I am also an Institute of Children's Literature alumna who enjoys writing about the triumph of the human spirit.
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So clever… and I love the rhyme scheme. Great work, Tiffany!
So beautiful. “Love drunk” ❤️❤️❤️
So beautiful Tiff, may the destinies perfectly align. Wonderful.
Aww, this is so beautiful. Well done, my friend.
"This half-century-old maiden is feeling love-drunk" is my favourite line. Great work!
What a whirlwind of love and destiny! Tifff ✨ The tango of fate, a heart unlocked, and love-drunk vibes (without the booze). Your words glow as pink as those skies—romantic, vibrant, and full of life! Beautifully done! 💖😊
💙 gorgeously written!!
Dizzyingly exciting! ❤️
Using humor and emotion to capture the excitement and unpredictability of falling in love, this is fabulous!
Now I am finding it hard to choose my favourite, I love the second line of this one. The signal of distress really adds a nice touch, deepening the plot of love. Outstanding and deeply memorable. ‘This half century old maiden’ gets me all the time, it’s such an iconic line, printed on my mind for all eternity —sounds fresh and new every time I read, it’s timeless! 👏🏽👌🏽♥️🤗
Love it 🥰! Lol , I get LOVE drunk to without drinking alcohol ,too. Welcome to the Love Stuck Club sister .Cheers !
Love struck! This was great, Tiffany!
A perfect rendition of falling in, whether we expect it or not. Letting the guard take a lunch break is worth it...sometimes. 💖
This is stunning! Love your gorgeous poem! 💓🌟
Time to hire a new guard, lol. Jokes aside, this is such a wonderful poem Tiffy!
Time for Valentine's, I see! A good one, Tiffany.
Glorious love, love poem!!! Love it!!!
I love this entry!
Ouuuu, I love, love, love this, Tiffany!! Especially that last line - pure magic. 💗💗💗
Love drunk and I don’t even drink ….gold