scratches in my mind - perspective
Another inspirational, thought-provoking senryu
By Paul StewartPublished 2 years ago • Updated 2 years ago • 1 min read
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as death awaits us,
life continues, regardless,
until we perish
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until we perish
life continues, regardless,
all is awaiting
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Thanks for reading!
Author's Notes: Another thought-provoking, inspirational senryu duo for you all in this unexpected mini-series.
Below are the others in the "scratches in my mind" series so far:
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Paul Stewart
Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.
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Comments (7)
Another Paulindrome! There I said it, hehehehehehe 🍩🥐
Admire how you capitalize on the positioning of each word in these! Another triumph!
As Rachael says, may you long remain itchy!
I like these scratches. I hope you remain itchy.
Just keep going and see where it all takes us. Very nice, Paul.
Inspiring- woop woop! There better be some good stuff up ahead then! 😄
This reminded me of a favorite poetic line: ‘Because I could not stop for death, Death kindly stopped for me.’ All is awaiting. Hopeful and terrifying at the same time.