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Wholly Loved

Give and take

By K.B. Silver Published about 5 hours ago β€’ 1 min read
Photo by cottonbro studio: https://www.pexels.com/photo/people-pulling-on-chains-7678452/

How can I expect

mercy and respect

in the face of such

overwhelming disconnect

πŸ–‡β€οΈβ€πŸ”₯πŸ–‡

You are me

we became one

I cannot blame you

for what I have become

πŸ–‡β€οΈβ€πŸ”₯πŸ–‡

We pull and tug

against the strands

like tangled chains

wrapped around a stand

πŸ–‡β€οΈβ€πŸ”₯πŸ–‡

It’s only once we give up

our prideful pulling

taking our time

reverse the effort, pushing

πŸ–‡β€οΈβ€πŸ”₯πŸ–‡

When I accept

that you need help

and you give me time

to find myself

πŸ–‡β€οΈβ€πŸ”₯πŸ–‡

We are unbound

coming together in bliss

this pair stronger

than either ever was

K.B. Silver

Gratitudelove poemssurreal poetryperformance poetry

About the Creator

K.B. Silver

K.B. Silver has poems published in magazine Wishbone Words, and lit journals: Sheepshead Review, New Note Poetry, Twisted Vine, Avant Appa[achia, Plants and Poetry, recordings in Stanza Cannon, and pieces in Wingless Dreamer anthologies.

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  • Minou J. Lindeabout 5 hours ago

    This was so beautiful! Everything came together perfectly.

  • Alex Torresabout 5 hours ago

    What a great piece. That first stanza hits really hard. And then the rest feels so deep and authentic. Amazing job!

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