
I lost all my
good sense
years ago
1000 beers ago
I wrote her
100 times
no reply
then
I tried to write
about my heart
I wrote
while my life
fell apart
Sonnets given away
to one so
less deserving
my devotion
never swerving
Just me and
my trusty laptop
watching the
penny drop
heartbreak
after
heartbreak
crying ink
into a paper bag
of booze
no one else
to choose
With ale
I cannot lose
drinking in
the blues
No music needed
my heart
already conceded
to many bottles
of Guinness
my spirit's
just not in it.
I bled all
the ink I had
before things got
really bad.
Volumes written
of Lost Love
my velvet heart
her iron glove
I still write
from time
to time
I try to rhyme
but my rhythm
is mostly benign
Poetry that used
to run through
my veins
now replaced
with hops
and barley
that all tastes
the same
each bottle
baptized in
tears of the
past, the sting
of a loss lass.
there are no
more beers on
the balcony
that ferry boat
has sailed
far away from me
so once again
as the barkeep
kicks me out
at 2am
past closing time
(although I don't
really know it)
he says goodnight
to me,
the
Paper bag poet.
_______________
Thanks for reading! - Sam
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Sam Harty is a poet of raw truth and quiet rebellion. Author of Lost Love Volumes I & II and The Lost Little Series, her work confronts heartbreak, trauma, and survival with fierce honesty and lyrical depth. Where to find me
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Comments (6)
OH DAMN POET. I think this is one of my new favorites of yours. The rhythm, the style, the voice, just sublime and raw and hits ya right in the beer belly.
Wonderful, Sam <3
Sounds a bit like my life, Sam. If all else fails, have a drink or three!
That was very moving; not what I expected with that title!
The saddest lime in written history: "there are no more beers on the balcony" 😭 Lol. I'm guessing it's a metaphor for no more romance? Unless I'm reading too much into it.
Wow, some really great lines here including this one -no music needed, my heart‘s already conceded- 🤩