Nature Walk

A Senryū

By D. J. ReddallPublished about a year ago • 1 min read

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Are my ears lying?

Did a foolish, old monkey

Just tell me to sit?

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D. J. Reddall

I write because my time is limited and my imagination is not.

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Kodahabout a year ago
I wonder if this conveys a sense of surprise and frustration in a very direct and playful way. Incredibly, done! 💓
Cathy holmesabout a year ago
Haha. Yep, probably.
Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a year ago
I have no idea who is that foolish old monkey but I love it hahahahhaa
Andrea Corwin about a year ago
They talk, just not in English but it would be cool if they did.
Sean A.about a year ago
This feels like there’s a story involving one of your students.
Silver Dauxabout a year ago
This was great! Very witty writing!
Rachel Deemingabout a year ago
Ha!
C.Z.about a year ago
Love the thoughts of a sassy wolf!
Matthew J. Frommabout a year ago
this is my dog every. single. day.

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