Moonlight Whispers
Gentle Surrender Haikuplet
By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished about a year ago • Updated about a year ago • 1 min read
Photo by Anthony Cantin on Unsplash
The moon starts to pull
Calling me to surrender
My waves to his shore
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Calmly he whispers
I'm restless, like a wild wind
Rising to his call
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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
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Comments (6)
Oooh! I really love this one. Loved the romantic metaphor of the sea moved by the moon’s pull!
Oh my goodness, Kelli, this one is so beautiful! The metaphors here are just so on point and romantic
This is actually amazing. I love it!
Wonderful one
That's is the power of moon is everywhere you are, nice poem.
Oh, that moonlight gets you no matter how you try. The power of the moon, Good work.