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Moonlight Whispers

Gentle Surrender Haikuplet

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
Moonlight Whispers
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The moon starts to pull

Calling me to surrender

My waves to his shore

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Calmly he whispers

I'm restless, like a wild wind

Rising to his call

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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • John Coxabout a year ago

    Oooh! I really love this one. Loved the romantic metaphor of the sea moved by the moon’s pull!

  • Kenny Pennabout a year ago

    Oh my goodness, Kelli, this one is so beautiful! The metaphors here are just so on point and romantic

  • Jumbo Slice about a year ago

    This is actually amazing. I love it!

  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

    Wonderful one

  • Latasha karenabout a year ago

    That's is the power of moon is everywhere you are, nice poem.

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    Oh, that moonlight gets you no matter how you try. The power of the moon, Good work.

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