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Last Poem From Mars

The heartfelt loneliness of Rover living on Mars can be relatable on earth in this poem.

By Gerry ThibeaultPublished 16 days ago 1 min read
Last Poem From Mars
Photo by Wolfgang Hasselmann on Unsplash

Unbearable winds beget on

whims and warmth of the sun.

Days and nights scouring depths,

living within the grips of strangers

unlike the ones on mars with its generous

offer of forty more minutes in its day.

Mayflies have only twenty-four hours

to love—I watched one fall from a branch,

it is true what they say about brook trout.

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Gerry Thibeault

aspiring poet working on his first chapbook of poetry...

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  • Gerry Thibeault (Author)11 days ago

    Thanks so much Aarsh. I’m so happy you like this one. Can you imagine being on Mars alone nobody to talk with and the mayfly doesn’t have a mouth to communicate with but has a job to do. I’m glad it worked for you!!

  • Aarsh Malik12 days ago

    This is quietly moving. The loneliness of the rover feels very human, especially set against time, distance, and fleeting life. It stayed with me.

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