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Glow

For Dad

By Emma Kate GeePublished 3 years ago 1 min read
By Emma Kate Coleman (July 20, 2023)

Dad, pick me up. Take me up to my room.

Let me sit in your lap with my face to the moon.

Pull out the big book, and sing me a song.

I'll rock in your arms, pain of day long gone.

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Dad, pick me up. Put me to bed.

Tuck in my feet, and kiss my head.

Don't shut the door. The dark will get in.

I'll look at the time, red glow on my skin.

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Dad, pick me up. I'm big now, but weak.

The glow is dull and the dark at its peak.

Pull me out of this pit. Lift my chin to the sky.

I'll hold your hand and the fear can die.

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Dad, put me down. I have to go.

I love a man who adds life to the glow.

Don't shed a tear. I'll be home in good time.

But my hand is his now, not yours or mine.

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Dad, put me down. Gift me the book.

It'll stay in my case with the ones that I took.

When I long for your hand and my eyes mist blue,

I'll hold them and know that you love me, too.

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This poem was written in response to the Short and Sweet Challenge issued by Vocal: "Write a love poem using only words with four letters or less."

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About the Creator

Emma Kate Gee

Thrift queen and photography peasant seeking creativity and community. Lover of dogs, antique stores, and homemade bread. Writing hard and clear about what hurts.

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  • Ian Read2 years ago

    Outstanding work!

  • Jazzy 3 years ago

    This is phenomenal! 🥹

  • The sweet cadence is just right -- feels like a nursery rhyme. An emotional arc of love.

  • Nice!😊💕

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Eloquently written!!!! Emotionally touching!!! Loved it!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Leslie Writes3 years ago

    Woah. This was powerful! Is someone cutting onions in here? Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem :)

  • This is lovely and would be great in our poetry weekend in Vocal Social Society on Facebook

  • Test3 years ago

    Oh my goodness, this was so sweet! I like how you were able to honor two different kinds of love within one poem.

  • No matter what, we're always Daddy's little princess. This was so sweet!

  • Test3 years ago

    Beautiful. Creative and full of emotion ❤️

  • Beautiful. Reminds me of cats in the cradle. 70’s song

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