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Evaluation for a new love feeling

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By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished about 21 hours ago 1 min read
Evaluation for a new love feeling
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you set up an evaluation for a new love feeling

Each time there was a change in the language that it would use

In that language there is a body’s response

You feel that your feet cannot move properly, your inner ear is not properly working

Your muscles feel weak even after lifting your heart into your mouth,

So you learn to accept the dizzy sensation

You experience flight in the fight

Against your enemy, the brain

Your endless battle of logic versus reality versus your deepest feelings

The new love feeling that surrounds your every breath, every moment, every word that makes a new sound that feels familiar yet brand new.

heartbreak

About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

My work:

Patheos,

The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,

The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books

Silent Bites by Eukalypto

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout 17 hours ago

    Your endless battle of logic versus reality "versus your deepest feelings" That battle is so real! Loved your poem!

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