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Echoes Of Steel

A sad poem

By BurkPublished 2 years ago • 1 min read
Echoes Of Steel
Photo by Tsvetoslav Hristov on Unsplash

Heavy it rests within my hand,

an object of formidable stand,

forged of iron, wood, and chrome;

manual function, monotone.

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The elongated form, firm in my grasp,

The consequences not to be taken in jest.

The weight scarcely do I feel.

Beware, for the aftermath is real!

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I feel its chill against my brow,

can hear my teeth chattering now.

Yet within, only sadness blooms.

I pull the trigger! The weapon booms.

sad poetry

About the Creator

Burk

Dad of 5.

Writer from Germany.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 years ago

    This was so heartbreaking and tragic! Such a poignant poem!

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