Echoes in the Dark
When silence speaks louder than words, your soul begins to rise.

In the quiet, where the world forgets,
I hear the whispers that cling to the walls of my mind.
Soft, trembling voices,
echoes of moments I buried
beneath laughter, beneath smiles,
beneath the weight of pretending
that everything is okay.
Each secret I hid
breathes again in the shadows.
It knows my tremble,
my fear of being too much,
my fear of being not enough.
It watches, patient,
like the last star before dawn,
waiting for me to notice it.
I remember the nights
when my heartbeat was a drum
too loud for the silent room,
too honest for the quiet world.
I traced the walls
with trembling fingertips,
hoping to find the edge
where my loneliness ends
and someone—anyone—
understands.
But understanding
is a fragile thing.
It flickers,
like candlelight in a storm,
and I have learned
that most will not wait.
They do not linger in the dark
to hear the echoes
I cannot silence.
Still, I listen.
I lean close to the hum beneath my ribs,
to the rhythm of my own pulse,
because somewhere,
in this vast, uncharted night,
there is truth.
Truth that says
your scars are maps,
not prisons.
That your tears are rivers,
not ruins.
That the echoes in the dark
are not warnings
but invitations
to rise.
Rise, though the floor trembles.
Rise, though the sky is heavy
with unshed storms.
Rise, though the world has forgotten
the shape of your name.
Rise, because even in shadow
there is beauty,
even in silence
there is voice,
even in despair
there is breath.
I remember a day
when I thought I could not breathe.
When the walls of my mind
were filled with the weight of expectations,
and my own heartbeat
was a prisoner.
I thought I was alone.
And yet, even then,
there was a whisper:
“You are here.
You are alive.
And you are enough.”
It was not loud.
It did not shout.
It did not demand
that I suddenly forgive the world
or myself.
It simply waited.
Like a small flame,
steady, enduring,
teaching me patience
in the art of survival.
I have walked through nights
that seemed endless,
through streets wet with rain,
through alleys filled with forgotten voices,
and each step has been a question:
Can I rise?
Can I shine?
Can I be seen
without fear
without shame?
The answer is not simple.
It is slow.
It comes in fragments:
a kind word from a stranger,
a smile from someone who sees me,
the quiet acceptance of my own trembling heart.
And so, I gather the echoes.
Piece by piece,
I build a mosaic
from the fragments of myself
I once thought broken.
Each memory,
each scar,
each fear
becomes a tile
in a pattern
that no one can erase.
I speak to the night
as if it were a friend:
“You are heavy, yes,
but you are also patient.
You hold my story
in the folds of your darkness,
and you will not judge me
for needing time
to find my light.”
There is a strange beauty
in listening to your own echoes.
In hearing the soft truths
that only emerge
when the world is asleep,
when the noise has faded,
when you are left
with the raw, unguarded self
you usually hide.
In these quiet hours,
I learn that hope is not always a shout.
Sometimes,
it is a whisper.
Sometimes,
it is a breath between tears.
Sometimes,
it is simply the courage
to stand again
when everything inside you
is begging you to fall.
The echoes in the dark
teach me patience,
teach me love,
teach me that survival is sacred,
and that rising
is an art
not for the faint of heart,
but for those brave enough
to honor their own shadows.
So I rise.
Slowly,
hesitantly,
but I rise.
With the echoes in my chest,
with the whispers in my soul,
with the quiet understanding
that I am more than the sum
of my fears,
more than the nights that held me,
more than the silence
that almost consumed me.
I rise,
and in rising,
I carry the darkness
like a familiar song,
like a teacher,
like a mirror
that reminds me
I am here,
I am alive,
and there is beauty
even in the shadows
where the world forgets to look.
And the echoes,
soft and patient,
follow me,
not as chains,
but as wings.
About the Creator
Manal
Storyteller,dreamer and lifelong learner,I am Manal.I have 3 year experience of artical writing.I explore ideas that challenge,inspire and spark conversation.Jion me on this journey of discovery.
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