pale blue fire sifts
Tired bones, lonely soft soul
Can you keep me whole?
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'Tired bones, lonely soft soul' is a stunning line! Well done!
Heart broken!!! Left a ♥
Nice and Deep Piece 💙👥💯📝
This is so beautiful. I love the contrast between "pale blue" and "fire". Also, the rhyme at the end is lovely :)
Fabulous work!
fantastic. I loved it.
Tired bones, lonely soft soul. That line resonated so deeply with me! Loved your Haiku Merly!
Probably not, my friend. But I would do what I can to support your healing.
Nice work great writing I’m new here so I’ve just dropped a few books❤️