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A Celebration of Divorce

By L.K. RolanPublished 12 months ago 1 min read

He screamed orders,
a dishonorably discharged god,
rewiring my nervous system.

Do this. Don’t do that
.
March, salute, obey.

A picture-perfect love,
red, white, and blue deception.

Inside, I bled.
Holding my insides,
terrified to tell the world—

you were the bullet,
the war,

the wound that never healed.

Elegyfact or fictionheartbreaklove poemssad poetryMental Health

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L.K. Rolan

L.K studied Literature in college. She lives with her handsome, bearded boyfriend Tom and their two cats.

They all enjoy cups of Earl Grey tea together, while working on new stories and planning adventures for the years ahead.

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  • Mike Singleton 💜 Mikeydred 12 months ago

    So intense, great poetry

  • C. Rommial Butler12 months ago

    Been there. Done that. Lost the t-shirt in the divorce. Well-wrought!

  • Tales by J.J.12 months ago

    Your poem vividly captures the intense and painful emotions of betrayal and enduring trauma. Well done.

  • Omgggg, this was so heartwrenching! Loved your poem!

  • Komal12 months ago

    Whew. This one punches hard and leaves a sting. The imagery is sharp, the pain raw, and that last line? Brut

  • Nice work . Please check my stories out as well if you get a chance.

  • Ignited Minds12 months ago

    Powerful and raw depiction of trauma and control.

  • Lightning Bolt ⚡12 months ago

    This is awesome. I especially love the first stanza. ⚡💙⚡

  • Susan Payton12 months ago

    Such an extremely sad poem - Nicely articulated.

  • Rachel Deeming12 months ago

    This feels allegorical with the mention of red, white and blue and yet, also deeply personal.

  • Mother Combs12 months ago

    such a sad poem that's a fact of life for so many

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