2 Cup Of Noodles...
~~Entry #1 for The 'Small Heat' Haiku Challenge~~
By Tiffany GordonPublished about a month ago • Updated about a month ago • 1 min read
Photo by Charlies X on Unsplash
Two cup of noodles...
Steamed collegic nostalgia...
Torrid and yummy...
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Tiffany Gordon
I am a super-spiritual, fun-loving artist, writer, & peer-counselor residing in the Pacific Northwest. I am also an Institute of Children's Literature alumna who enjoys writing about the triumph of the human spirit.
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Daahlink Tg - I lived in Japan for a year, but my daily ration of the original 'Soba' noodles was a bit different from a cup of soup..! Happy New Year Old Bud! jk.in.l.a.
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Honestly, Tiffany Gordon, you captured that "torrid and yummy" vibe so well in just a few lines. Good luck with the challenge! 🎈🙌
💖You brought such sophistication to those two cups of noodles! With your choice of diction like torrid, it is another word I could wear on a brooch on my imaginary college attire. 💖 💖I could easily see this as a meal at a five-star restaurant, even if that restaurant is a college, lol! Your transferred epithet in “steamed collegic nostalgia” was delightful. 💖
Ha! I used to be a connoisseur and even made spaghetti and meatballs using it as the noodle part, lol. Nice entry, Tiffa! 🤩
Mmm 😋🥰
So great. I make some torrid ramen myself - I add kimchi, green onions, cilantro, and a little garlic salt because.....salt. I will spare you my torrid collegiate nostalgia recipe.... Really great and funny work!
Ha ha gotta love a pot noodle. Brilliantly captured the feeling
Short, sweet and deliciously relatable. Makes me want a cup of noodles right now.
Oh my goodness!!! This haiku is genius! It has an iconic product, nostalgia, controversy, and humor. How in the world did you fit that into three little lines? Wonderful work dear cousin Tiffany!
Yep. I hear dat. many can relate.
Ugh! Noodles o memory. Um-healthy not so much but so yummy. Warm and fills the gap.
Both my son and daughter consistently consume soba noodles. Just wish they were in biodegradable packaging... A fond haiku memory!
What a yummy take on the challenge, Tiff! Great haiku!
I love this take for this challenge! Good luck!!
I still love me some cup-o-noodles!
College completely ruined these for me. I ate way too many back then.
Well-wrought! I ate many of those in my down and out days!
Nostalgic is right! A great entry 🙂
Gosh, how many of these cup noodles I ate at uni... I love you came up with this idea!
Oh, that brings up some memories! Great haiku, Tiffany!
Yes! I remember eating noodle when I was poor lol
Love it 😀
Ah, those were the days. Such nice memories hehehehe