"Time Defeated Our Love"
"We loved deeply, but life kept pulling us apart."

The train on the platform was the last one of the night, and the last one for us. The station was silent except for the distant sound of footsteps and the faint whistle of time slipping away. Amid the fog and hurry, two hearts stood still — mine and hers — while everything around us moved forward.
That night was not just an ordinary goodbye. It was the ending of a love story that had survived everything… except time.
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Flashback: The Beginning
I met Maheen in university. She walked into the classroom with eyes full of quiet storms. While others saw just a beautiful girl, I saw a soul trying to hide its depth. We became friends, then best friends, and slowly — without even realizing — we fell in love.
She was from a traditional family. Her father was strict, the kind of man who had already mapped out every step of her life. I, on the other hand, was a middle-class dreamer. I believed in building a life from scratch — a life full of little joys and evening cups of chai at the window.
For years, we loved each other in silence, in messages, in late-night calls, in glances across the room. But love, no matter how pure, doesn’t always win against real life.
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Reality Hits
Our final year ended. Dreams got bigger. Life started demanding decisions.
Then came the moment that shattered us — Maheen’s engagement was fixed with a boy chosen by her father. She cried. She begged. She tried to fight it. But her voice was too soft for the noise of tradition and society.
I asked her to run away with me.
She looked at me with tears in her eyes and whispered,
“I can break my heart, but I can’t break my mother’s.”
My world fell apart in silence. I didn’t argue. I didn’t force her. I just watched her walk away… again.
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The Goodbye
The platform that night felt like the ending of a movie where the hero doesn’t win. The love doesn’t bloom. The couple doesn’t run away.
She was standing by the train, dressed in light green — simple, beautiful, and heartbreakingly distant. Her face was calm, but her eyes… her eyes still held our story.
I stepped closer and asked one last time,
“Maheen, can you think just once more?”
She smiled, not the kind of smile that brings peace — the kind that holds a lifetime of pain behind it. And she said,
“You gave me your time. But time… never gave us a chance.”
The train whistle screamed. Doors began to close. She turned, and without another word, stepped inside.
In my hand was a small gift — the same pocket watch we bought on our last university day. It had the words engraved:
“Forever isn’t just a word.”
Now the watch has stopped ticking. Maybe time itself gave up… or maybe it paused out of respect for a love that couldn’t win.
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Years Later…
Someone told me she’s happy now. She has children. A stable life. A good husband.
I smiled and nodded.
I too am alive — breathing, working, living — but not truly living.
Sometimes, late at night, I wonder…
What if time had given us just a little more?
What if her family had waited just one more year?
What if I had held her hand a little tighter?
But time doesn’t stop. It doesn’t wait. It just keeps moving forward, and sometimes, it leaves love behind.
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In the End...
Love didn’t leave us.
We didn’t betray each other.
We didn’t fall out of love.
We simply ran out of time.
And sometimes, that’s the saddest ending of all.
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(The End)


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