Whispers in the Attic
Shadows That Move on Their Own

Emma had always been drawn to places that others avoided, and the old Marlowe house at the edge of town was the perfect example. Children whispered stories about it, claiming the attic held spirits that moved furniture and whispered names of anyone daring enough to enter. Emma, however, was determined to prove that these were just the superstitions of small-town imaginations. The moment she pushed open the rotting front door, a gust of stale, cold air hit her, carrying the scent of decay and old wood. Dust rose in clouds as she stepped inside, each creaking floorboard echoing her cautious movements. She moved carefully through the main hall, examining the faded wallpaper and broken chandeliers, and eventually found the narrow staircase leading to the attic.
The attic door itself seemed to resist her touch, but with a firm push, it swung open with a shriek that made her jump. Inside, the room was cramped and filled with forgotten objects: old trunks, stacks of yellowed books, and furniture draped in dusty sheets. For a moment, Emma felt relief, convinced that the stories were just exaggerations. But then she heard it—a faint whisper that seemed to come from nowhere and everywhere at once. It was soft but unmistakably human: “Emma…” She froze, straining to hear, but the attic remained empty. Her heart thudded in her chest as her mind raced for logical explanations, telling herself that it was the wind or the echo of her own footsteps.
Then came another whisper, clearer and more insistent: “You shouldn’t be here.” Panic rose, yet curiosity rooted her to the spot. The shadows cast by the moonlight began to twist unnaturally along the walls, and Emma realized with horror that they were moving independently of the objects that created them. Shapes began to coalesce into forms that were vaguely human but wrong in their angles and proportions. The whispers multiplied, circling her, filling the space with an eerie chorus that seemed to echo her own fear back at her. Emma’s rational mind struggled to comprehend what she was witnessing. Every instinct screamed at her to leave, yet every step toward the staircase felt heavy and slow, as if the shadows themselves resisted her escape.
With a sudden surge of courage, Emma lunged toward the stairs, knocking over a small trunk in the process. The shadows recoiled, hissing in unison, and she stumbled down the steps, her hands scrabbling for purchase on the splintered railing. Once outside, she didn’t stop running until the house was far behind her, swallowed by the darkness of the overgrown yard. Weeks later, she could not forget the whispers. They returned in her dreams, sometimes so vivid she woke shaking, and sometimes in quiet moments when she was alone, she could hear them calling her name in the wind. Emma realized that some places do not release their hold, and some curiosities are better left unexplored. The Marlowe house, with its moving shadows and secret voices, was a warning: there are mysteries in the world that demand respect, and some doors, once opened, can never truly be closed.
They returned in her dreams, sometimes so vivid she woke shaking, and sometimes in quiet moments when she was alone, she could hear them calling her name in the wind. Emma realized that some places do not release their hold, and some curiosities are better left unexplored. The Marlowe house, with its moving shadows and secret voices, was a warning: there are mysteries in the world that demand respect, and some doors, once opened, can never truly be closed.
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Sudais Zakwan
Sudais Zakwan – Storyteller of Emotions
Sudais Zakwan is a passionate story writer known for crafting emotionally rich and thought-provoking stories that resonate with readers of all ages. With a unique voice and creative flair.




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