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"HELP!!!!!!!"

A voice screamed from across the deserted parking garage.

By Dylan Published 3 years ago 1 min read
"HELP!!!!!!!"
Photo by Brice Cooper on Unsplash

Danny just reached his car after spending three extra hours at the office.

"HELP!!!!! HELP ME!!!! PLEASE SOMEBODY HELP ME!!!!!"

A female voice screamed, sounding like she was crying underneath her shrieking vocal chords.

He watched as a young woman emerged from a darkened area of the empty parking lot, underneath flickering overhead lights. She was covered in blood from head to toe.

"HELP ME!!!" She cried out noticing Danny.

"Oh Shit..." He muffled and began running to help her.

Suddenly, he watched as a machete drove into her skull.

"Holy Shit!!!" Danny yelled before bee-lining it to his car.

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  • Roy Stevens3 years ago

    Well... that was intense!

  • N.J. Karp3 years ago

    Woah 😮 definitely evokes some intense feelings for a short read. Good work!

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