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Beginners Luck: Outsiders 4

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By Everett ScaifePublished about 14 hours ago 5 min read

When the two Derboul had stopped just before cresting the hill, they could not have picked a worse spot. The place they stood was the very place Kwernoss had used to range his bow and arrow skills. Several large deer had fallen in that very spot. Letting out a long slow breath, Kwernoss notched his arrow and drew his bow back waiting for the right moment. He felt the empowerment of his masks eye emblem steady his hand and even help guide his adjustments in the fine muscles to place a killing shot on the slightly larger of the two warriors.

A thought came to his mind, one that was not rational or even wise. The whispers wrapped in anger that surged from his soul told him to strike fear in his enemy. They were not prey to be cleanly killed and harvested. No. They needed to suffer, and fear him as a human, and maybe just maybe they would finally leave them alone. Adjusting his aim, he switched targets to the slightly smaller of the two and aimed at her leg. Just as the two enemies clasped each others arms, he let his arrow fly. It had struck inside the thigh of the warrior on the leg farthest from him. If this alien was anything like a human, major arteries would be kept inside the leg. His intuition paid off: when the arrow passed all the way through the leg, a large amount of blood began squirting rhythmically as a shriek came from the warrior. With a smirk he jumped from his elevated position.

Light as a feather he landed in the grass, and in the shadows he felt the camouflage ability activate. It wasn't true camouflage, bending light in a way that made him impossible to see. His ability made his clothes and bear-skin cloak blend more with his surroundings. As long as he was carefully stalking and avoiding anything that would make noise, he could easily be mistaken for a bush, or maybe another animal. Reaching down into his quiver he notched another arrow and held the third in his draw hand. His mask automatically marked his arrow for him to find with a red outline that could be seen through brush and trees.

At a frightening pace, fueled by adrenaline and rage, Kwernoss circled his victims.

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Migoene rushed to bandage the wound, noting the excessive blood loss. Reaching forward he placed a hand on the wound and felt energy leave his body, and a faint smell of cauterized flesh reached his nose through his mask.

Myene spoke through gritted teeth, "The bleeding effect has stopped. The shot came from up and to your right." Myene winced as she motioned with her head at the direction of where they had been attacked. Miogene caught a subtle shift in the shadows from the corner of his eyes and knew that their enemy was on the move. His heart raced and he whirled to try and track the beast. He cycled through his visions and finally settled on heat, a faint heat signature moved quickly and silently. Pretending to be oblivious, Miogene moved and put his back to the village to keep his eyes towards his incoming assailant, but also lifting his companion to her feet. When she stood, two more arrows whistled from the shadows of the trees. One buried itself in her right lower arm, the other Miogene caught in his hands. Myene screamed again as she ripped the arrow from her flesh.

"This one has no honor. He seeks to wound, when he could've killed cleanly." She spat as she crouched and put herself into a lowered combat stance, moving to pick up the first arrow that was stuck in the ground near a splatter of blood.

"I was able to spot him with heat, he seems to blend well with the foliage around him, and he hasn't made a sound yet." Migoene whispered the information, scanning their surroundings. After moments waiting for an attack that never came the two warriors turned and ran to the village.

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Kwernoss cursed himself, caught in his blood lust he had forgot to protect the village. He cursed again that the enemy had picked up his arrows, leaving him with no other weapon than a butchers knife. A panic began to eat his calm realizing that two of these invaders could massacre the village in moments. He hurried to make chase but a moment of clarity told him to not rush headlong into a likely ambush. So he took a longer route in hopes to strike one more time while these oppressor targeted the non sentient villagers. When he made it to the edge of the village he rounded a thatch roofed hut and saw one of the enemy killing the butcher in the street in front of his storehouse. A whistling noise was all that he heard as one of his arrows hit him in the chest.

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Derboul's fingers are longer than humans, and when combined with their lanky arms, each of the four arms and hands became more like an atlatl, when holding an arrow. Myene's aim was true as she threw each arrow one after the other at the sub boss's center of mass. One arrow went straight through him, another buried itself in his thigh, the last ricocheted off the humans mask and flying off into the woods. By the looks of him, the fight was over. Dismissing the now disabled human, Migoene and Myene moved house to house, person to person, methodically eradicating the beasts in their simple homes. Even with her wound Myene managed to partake in the slaughter with little more than one arm tucked against her torso and a slight hobble to her step. Lost in their task of senseless slaughter they began to laugh maniacally. Covered in blood they finished and walked back up the dirt road, taking deep breaths and steadying the adrenaline rushing through the veins. The looked and saw the sub-boss trembling with faint life in the kneeling position at the opposite side of the village.

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Blood seeped from Kwernoss and he felt despair take him. He had failed. The village was silent. The silence... brought a profound pain from his soul with all of the implications that came with it. He felt his vision begin to tunnel, and his heart beat weakened. Words whispered from the beyond on the breeze, filling his mouth.

"Now I shall shoot at another mark... one that man yet has struck... If I can hit it and Luck grants me glory." Gritting his teeth and mustering strength he lifted his mask up and off his face. Feeling the breeze blow against his skin, his trembling hand shakily grasped the arrow in his leg, and in a state of shock he ripped it up, out, and notched his bow in one motion. Loosing the arrow he smiled, whispering his final words as darkness took him.

"Your guest has not disgraced you... I did not miss what I aimed at..."

Fantasy

About the Creator

Everett Scaife

I have always enjoyed writing and I have always dreamed of publishing my own series of science fiction books

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