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Birthdays
Celebration caring comfort companions content
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Computers?!
Complex Calculating Communicating Content Computer
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
The Parents
Who and what are parents? Are parents teachers? Are they caregivers? Are they confidants? Are they friends? Could parents be all of these? I think parents are there to give instruction as teachers, but they are also there to listen to what we have to say as we should listen to what they have to say and hopefully learn from them. Parents are caregivers in a sense as well for they changed our diapers when we were babies and showed us right from wrong, and a whole lot more. They could be confidants for us when we wanted to share various kinds of information, but could they also be our friends too.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Sunshine
Blinding Orb Light sight seen
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Library
Knowledge pursuits ideas writing Readers
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Fireworks
Loud Colorful Sparkling Ingenuity Boom!
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
thunderstorm
Dark ominous mighty storm provocative
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Just look at me.
"Just look at me. I wish I remembered what happened to me." I was sitting on a blanket with my child and all of a sudden a big something came after me. "I kind of remember sharp teeth, but who did the teeth belong to I wondered. While looking around I saw my kid who seemed to have tears running down her face and all I could not help her. What was happening to me and the sharp teeth. They did hurt, but I knew that my kid well I hoped would start yelling just a little louder. Mommy help!
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Just look at me 2
Mommy came a running out of the house and yelled at the thing that had me with its' teeth. The thing dropped me right then and I saw that my leg seemed to have a hole, and I felt funny a few other places too. The mommy and my kid were now going into the house and the mommy was getting ready to do something. I hope whatever doesn't hurt. My kid started to smile a little and mommy said "Mr. Bear should be good as new in a few days and we will check his hurts in a bit."
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Adorable
Look at the baby asleep so peacefully dreaming of what.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
