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Halloween Pumpkins
Trying to frighten us and laugh at the same time. (Note: Happy Halloween and does this make you think of these pumpkins in a different way, yea or nay?)
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Pumpkins
Proud pleasing pumpkins promulgating Pride (Note: What about a pumpkins image or ego?)
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Trick or Treat
Pumpkin says trick or treat let me lick your feet. (Note: Who remembers this old rhyme from childhood? I know I am pushing it with this haiku.)
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
A Playground
Play pouncing pounding pondering playing. (Note: How many of these words have you seen acted out at a playground watching your child?)
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
A Book Review
Borrowing brilliant building block blueprints. (Note: How to you use old books?)
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Children
Cuddly caring curious clumsy children (Note: Does this describe or critique kids everywhere?)
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
A Teddy Bear
Truly trusting trusty treating trouble-free. (Note: I think this critiques the reasons for having and loving a teddy bear.)
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Twin Towers
Towering tantalizing tourists to think. (Note: What do you think about this?)
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Who is Winnie the Pooh?
Pondering pathways practical particular partner. (Note: I believe this describes Pooh Bear in a way. Share what you think.)
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Thanksgiving
Thanks thoughts thinking thoroughly Thanksgiving! (I know it is kind of early, but it for some reason it said write me.)
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Holy Bible
Belief believing biblical believers begging. (Note: Begging to be a believer or begging for salvation.)
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Have you ever noticed?
Have you ever noticed in several kinds of events like hurricanes, tornadoes, and even other kinds of traumatic events that there is a book a very good book that seems never to be damaged, but maybe a little depending on the event. Did you ever think why that is so? The answer is simple for the words of this good book are the words and teachings of the Lord and even the fires of Hell cannot destroy those words no matter what may happen. I do not have to give you the answer for you know it already don't you.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique