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Arcane: How Riot’s Animated Masterpiece Redefined Video Game Adaptations
Video game adaptations have long struggled to capture the depth and complexity of their source material. Arcane, the critically acclaimed animated series from Riot Games and Fortiche Productions, not only overcame this challenge but redefined what a video game adaptation can achieve.
By Bounty Hunter 11 months ago in Critique
Self-Editing Epiphany. Top Story - March 2025.
People Pleaser: A blessing or a curse? I am the youngest of six, to a mother that struggled her whole life with Bi-polar disorder, before there was positive treatment. She was the daughter of an English teacher and the oldest granddaughter to a preacher. Because of this, she struggled to let the mask fall and get the help she needed.
By Kelli Sheckler-Amsden11 months ago in Critique
A Break on the Moors
The voices had started from the time that she had got there. Melinda didn't believe in ghosts, thought it was a load of hokum, and she willed her brain to capture and hold on to a rational explanation. But there was none, becoming increasingly obvious, the longer she remained in the cottage.
By Rachel Deeming12 months ago in Critique
The Legend of Vox Machina: From Critical Role to Animated Glory
The rise of The Legend of Vox Machina from a tabletop RPG campaign to a full-fledged animated series is a testament to the power of dedicated fandom and high-quality storytelling. As an adaptation of Critical Role, the show brings the beloved characters of the original campaign to life with stunning animation, strong performances, and a narrative that blends humor, action, and emotional depth. But how well does it translate the essence of the original game, and what impact has it had on both the animation and RPG landscapes?
By Bounty Hunter 12 months ago in Critique
Ready Player One: From Page to Screen – A Tale of Nostalgia and Adaptation
Few stories embody the essence of pop culture nostalgia as effectively as Ready Player One. Ernest Cline’s novel, published in 2011, became an instant hit among gamers and geeks, offering a treasure trove of 1980s references wrapped in a fast-paced virtual adventure. The 2018 film adaptation, directed by Steven Spielberg, promised to bring this digital odyssey to life on the big screen. However, as with many adaptations, significant changes were made—some enhancing the story, others altering its core themes. This review will explore the key differences between the novel and the film, evaluating how each medium delivers its vision.
By Bounty Hunter 12 months ago in Critique
Lessons on writing In the Name of God
Original Excerpt: The church smelled of rotting wood and something deeper—something old, wet, and sour, like the breath of a thing that had been asleep too long. Father Guiseppie stood at the altar, hands clasped, whispering words to himself, though no one else was there to hear. The stained glass behind him flickered with the storm outside, flashes of red and blue staining his skin, turning his face into something both divine and grotesque. He knew what was coming. He had seen it before. The walls remembered. The floor remembered. Soon, so would he.
By Jason “Jay” Benskin12 months ago in Critique
Why Some Adaptations of Books Fail (And a Few That Get It Right)
Translating a beloved book into a successful movie is no easy feat. Fans expect to see their favorite characters and storylines faithfully recreated, while filmmakers must balance runtime constraints, cinematic storytelling, and studio demands. Some adaptations become instant classics, while others fail spectacularly, alienating audiences and disappointing readers. But what separates a great adaptation from a disaster? Let’s break down where things go wrong—and highlight a few adaptations that actually got it right.
By Bounty Hunter 12 months ago in Critique
The Psalms
Prophetic words sacred and even secular allowing for learning the more important facets of simply living. Psalms are prayers and poems and even at times turned into songs. There are lessons to be learned by reading these poetic words if given a chance to really understand what they mean and figure out a way to work them into your daily living. Psalms are like pictures written in words of praise. Psalms are the way to accept who you are and show one what is important to live and accept who you are and what you are doing to help yourself.
By Mark Graham12 months ago in Critique
Commenting
What makes a good commenter? For me a good commenter is a person who can see beyond the basic ideas of an article or even a book. Commenters can make suggestions on how a story, or an article could be used by the reader. Commenters are a written version of being a listener. We read others' words as listeners hear the other words. Being a commenter is like being a teacher at times in a way for maybe that is why I like commenting on all the articles that I get in my notifications. Commenting gives me a chance as mentioned earlier to learn and make suggestions on others' writings.
By Mark Graham12 months ago in Critique
Waiting for a Call....
How many of you out there remember waiting on a certain phone call? Whether it be from a relative, friend, even a neighbor, or as I am today waiting for a call about an online teaching position? Waiting for this certain call when the other person sent an email stating the time and it is already past that time. I know the college that I hope to teach this course is in the Eastern time zone and I am now in the Central time zone, but I waited for the call at 8:30 AM my time which is 9:30 their time and even my 9:30 AM which is actually 10:30 AM their time. (Sorry for the time zone lesson).
By Mark Graham12 months ago in Critique
