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Jelly Doughnuts
Sugary goodness flavors abound here Go ahead. Enjoy! (Here is another one for when looking for images I saw this one that gave me the idea for this haiku. The syllable count is correct, and I hope you all can enjoy this one and not gain an ounce. Please comment.)
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Another Door
A gray door that says "Open me." What is there here for all to see there? (I believe that I am getting the hang of writing haikus. Also, I think I got the syllable count for the whole haiku as well as each of lines. Please read and comment for it is really appreciated.)
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Doors
A garden door opens to a garden of friends that grow up and down. (Here is another haiku about a particular door to a secret garden. I believe that I have the syllable count right for this one. Hope you like this one and please comment after you read this one.)
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
The Best Apple Watch To Buy Right Now
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By jayabout a year ago in Critique
Babies
Full of wandering Plenty of hugs abound with Babies are family. (Here is another haiku. Again, I feel that maybe the word 'hugs' is either one or two syllables. 'Family' is two syllables to me. I divided 'fam/ily' like this making it two syllables or could be three 'fam/i/ly'. 'Wan/der/ing' like this giving three syllables. Please comment it will be greatly appreciated.)
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Windows
Hey, eyes wide open vision clear not blurry now Windows to a view. ______ windows (pexels.com) A window down low Go down and look up and open
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Thunderstorm
Dark clouds are brewing Winds at high speeds now howling Thunderstorms to engage. (One last haiku for tonight. I think they are getting a little better, I hope. My inspiration for this one was I was hearing thunder outside as well as the dark, gray clouds and sky. Please comment if you want to.)
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Rainbows
Rainbows of color all all red, yellow, orange, green, blue now after a rain. (I believe I described a basic rainbow. Also, I do believe I have the 5, 7, 5 pattern of a proper haiku. I had these ideas, and I wanted to get them down before they left me never to return. Hope you read and comment.)
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
The Family
Family is caring and loving persons always together. (Another haiku for analysis and I think I am improving even just a little bit. I know that I need work. Does anybody know a good book on how to write these poems better. Let me know if possible. Thank you.)
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
A Bedroom
A place to bring a sense of solitude and peace a place to rest. (I think I am doing a little better on the writing of haiku, but I know I need practice. So, when I write more haikus please read and share your thoughts on them if you wouldn't mind. Thank you in advance.)
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Hot and Humid
Hot and humid day In Louisiana, again When will it get cold. (Here is another try at my writing a haiku. I think it is a little better. I do want all the suggestions I can get to help me improve in writing this kind of poem. I would really appreciate any help.)
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Book
An open book, Pages that we write and read. become a friend. (I tried to write a haiku for it has not been since junior high when I learned how to write these kinds of poems. I hope I am close. Let me know and leave a comment truly appreciated.)
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique