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NOBODY

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By JiGPublished 4 days ago 3 min read
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Nobody

Nobody appear out of nowhere

People see me writing and nothing of it

Nothing form a meaning nobody can understand

The worlds we living nobody cares we stop caring

Dr luther king mention our turns blind

But even him nohody didnt listen

I hope you hearing me coz im just nobody

In dreams of sorrow theres so kuch to say

Like theres no tommorrow

Until we meet again i got to go

Call me nobody just pop and go

Sweet like candy call me crazy

But its nohody that you reminds me

We view this world is a place of blessing we acknowledge the people who are rich and we help people who are in needs. We live inthe planet where theres a gap in everyway which makes the world shaky out of balance of this reality. Jesus has come to create our bridge to cross i doing so he ws sacrife in an altar for our soul to be accepted in heaven.

Our god loves us so much that even his only son he allowed it to be put in the cross so that we may live eternally.

People with power you cannonly imagine how their soil will travel on that dark tunnel light to see their fate in judgement day

And yet the homeless who has nothing to survive but has faith has more offer than those above him

The desciples took nothingbin this world but their sacrifices to complete their task has more worth that gold could anything has to offer in this world is a true arts of faith

We vame to this world with nothing and we depart with nothing to not to know godyou vould say your life is complete waste of time.

Even if you say i achieve everything but if crist ask you to lose everything in his name including all your posession to be able to enter to kingdom of God and you refuse that my friend we can say that you koss the opportunity of living a lifetime of heaven in the presence of the gather in heaven snd xhrist seated on his right.

we have a calling that mo matter where we are in life we ought to apply the word of god and restore our life in the balance on the daily basis becase we sre dying everyday.

Myvthought on this world would be that there are two sides that want to conquer the world externally and internally.

Externally there is a constant battle between good and evil in reality we overcome evil by doing good to make dominates this world in every situation.

The keys is in our minds that no matter whats we create our own reality despite what countries dominate other countries there always a way that good come out of it at the end

The power of individual does not matter atvthe end coz rheres always someone will replace thatvindividual what matters rhe most is your complete control on your minds that no matter whats is happening outside of our control one fact remains that we will die too and God will alwayz bless us to understand our journey to spread the love of hod to wverypne and to live happy without having to desire to pocess anyone or anything. To give is better than to take to live i peace is better that to live in chaos and hate to live in love is better to plant hate

We have the power to make this world a better world coz we slowly dying physically snd the our own plsnet if we dont be careful we dig our own graves

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About the Creator

JiG

Hi

Im Jonathan from Australia

Loves writing reading and my interest in cooking music and poetry

I have four kids and I love my kid

Ive recently seperated last Nov 2024 . Life is a mystery

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