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Why am I in the dark, Vocal?
Why am I in the dark, Vocal? I remember the enjoyment of writing poetry, knowing I would show no one. Then I decided to share, I put lots of poetry out there. People loved it. I gave it my all. Joining Vocal was the best day of all. Yet even though my work was and is good, I am held back by Vocal. I feel just not good enough. Maybe it’s just a passing thing, maybe. Maybe it will right itself or again be a praised thing. Vocal really should treat all the same, not put the same names up there every week to win and get all the fame. We all deserve a little praise as we write our hearts out on good and bad days. We pay the same yearly fees, so treat us all right. My poetry at least deserves that right.
By Marie381Uk 8 months ago in Critique
Monday morning chores
Well, another Monday morning and it's chore day for me. Usually, the first easy chore to do is to make my coffee and empty the dishwasher. After that it all depends on what I feel needs done. Laundry is started and after sharing this short article decided to vacuum the living room furniture and rugs followed by dusting the furniture. The beds have already been made, and the dogs have been walked and fed even though that everyday chore which is not really a chore is the first to be done. Who has a particular day for their chore day?
By Mark Graham8 months ago in Critique
Whispers of The Soul
I tasted death in the air, like cigarette ashes on my tongue. The thick woodsy flames that rose up on my father left patches of missing skin. His oils didn’t help with the stiff, leathery, charred-black skin that never grew back. It smelled like bleach and gasoline with a sharp stench of acrid.
By Angel Aguilar8 months ago in Critique
Mattress Firm . Content Warning.
Mattress Firm's "All Night Long" advertising campaign highlights what most of us have come to already know…People can suck! These commercials showcase the self-centered and self-serving society we have become. I do not blame or hold Lionel Richie responsible for the use of his song in these series of commercials. If anything he should take the fall for "The Simple Life" with his daughter and Paris Hilton.
By Clifford Kincaid8 months ago in Critique
Sustainability and it's relevance to long term success in the mobile computing industry.
Circa October 2013: The current generation of consumer electronics put an ever increasing amounts of integrated computer and radio network technologies into incredibly small and sophisticated packages. Mobile devices such as iPhones, Androids and tablet computers rely heavily upon modern battery technology built into small form factors to deliver the user experience to consumers. Despite the steady improvements in mobile computing power over the last half decade, there remains a substantial gap between the rate of evolution in technology in comparison to the capacities and efficiency of mobile battery components.
By Scott Cathery8 months ago in Critique
"Apple Intelligence Is A Failure"
Apple | Intelligence is like any other distributed computer system, layered within Von Neumann dervied binary summing algorithms and the OSI Layer Stack. Private Cloud Computing is sophisticated and currently the best implementation for safe delivery of AI moderated query and it is far from a failure.
By Scott Cathery8 months ago in Critique
"Don't give your kids a phone or a tablet, it's bad for them"
I've recently begun self paced study in Peterson Academy. Part of the interest has swung me over to some of the other resources that Jordan moderates or contributes to. This are my recent post comments to Dr Jordan B Peterson "Daily Wire +" segment regarding the advice to "don't give your kids devices" || (responding to) this is a massive decision | had to move to the computer for the edits. Two thumbs can be a challenge on the input.
By Scott Cathery8 months ago in Critique
God of the Conqueror: How Religion Was Weaponized Against the Colonized
The history of empire is not just a story of land and gold. It is also a story of God. From the Spanish missions of Latin America to the Anglican schools of Southern Africa, religious institutions were often the first tools of empire. Churches arrived before flags. Bibles before bullets. Priests before governors. And with them came the most dangerous lie ever sold: that submission to foreign rule was not only political, but divine.
By David Thusi8 months ago in Critique
