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Beneath Six Feet - Episode 2
The cold, unforgiving reality of a graveyard weighed heavily on the heart. The air was thick with a melancholic stillness that seemed to permeate the very essence of the place. Beneath a looming canopy of gray clouds, a lone coffin lay poised at the edge of a freshly dug grave, a silent testament to the inevitability of mortality. It was a scene that evoked a poignant blend of emotions, a mixture of grief and contemplation, as those gathered around the grave confronted the fragility of existence.
By Rev Dr. Alexander Fenning-Sencherey3 years ago in Critique
AI sums up Vocal Media
ChatGPT and Vocal Media I am getting used to ChatGPT but find it is not always accurate and I have to do additional research. This is why I utilize it sparingly. Today I decided to find out what Artificial Intelligence would tell me about Vocal Media and found it to be quite accurate. The following is what it had to say and perhaps someone else may catch a glitch or inaccuracy that I did not.
By Cheryl E Preston3 years ago in Critique
Advice Needed: A Yam's Tale
Hello there, everyone! I am once again taking another break from my regularly scheduled fiction to publish something in the new critique community. It was created by Vocal at a perfect time for me as, sat within my memory stick, a small story opening has existed. The problem with it is... I have no idea where to go with it!
By ThatWriterWoman3 years ago in Critique
Nostalgia on Wheels: The Most Popular Vehicles of the 1980s
The 1980s marked an era of bold fashion, vibrant music, and iconic pop culture moments. Alongside these trends, the automotive industry saw the rise of some of the most unforgettable vehicles that continue to evoke nostalgia among enthusiasts and collectors today. From muscle cars to compact hatchbacks, the 1980s had something for everyone. Let's take a journey back in time and explore the most popular vehicles that left an indelible mark on this vibrant decade.
By Justin Tardif3 years ago in Critique
Builderall 5.0 vs. Rapid Profit Machine: Choosing the Perfect Digital Marketing Duo
In the ever-evolving landscape of digital marketing, having the right tools at your disposal can make all the difference in achieving success. Two powerful contenders that have been gaining traction are Builderall 5.0 and Rapid Profit Machine (RPM). These platforms promise to transform your digital marketing endeavors and take your business to new heights. In this comprehensive guide, we'll delve into the features, benefits, and user experiences of Builderall 5.0 and Rapid Profit Machine, helping you make an informed choice for your digital marketing needs.
By XcellentWrite3 years ago in Critique
Crisis in the Amazon
Are we living our lives as if every day is a new fairytale unfolding. Granted, some fairy tales are far more wonderful for some than for others. There are people surviving day to day in not so fairytale like conditions, yet are doing more for the ecological survival of the planet than those who seem completely oblivious to warnings of "Less is More". If we are to continue to survive safely, we need to wake up to the reality of that which is unfolding around us. This is not a storied fairytale.
By Novel Allen3 years ago in Critique
Avoid These Common Mistakes at Your Social Security Disability Consultative Exam
Avoid These Common Mistakes at Your Social Security Disability Consultative Exam If you're seeking benefits, you'll want to avoid any missteps during your Social Security Disability Consultative Exam. It's a key stage in the process! This exam can determine whether or not you'll receive the benefits you need. But don't worry, we're here to guide you. We've gathered the most common mistakes people make. Armed with this knowledge, you can approach your consultative exam with confidence and increase your chances of success. Let's dive in and learn how to avoid these pitfalls.
By Jason Baril3 years ago in Critique
Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs.
One day Snow White a very special little girl with a rather controlling mother in law, who despised her, as she desired all Snow Whites fathers love and affection for herself. preceeds to send her into the woods to collect daffodils.
By Dawn Earnshaw3 years ago in Critique
Inspiring Success Stories of a Teen Entrepreneur
The Early Spark of Entrepreneurship From a young age, our girl CEO displayed a remarkable spark of entrepreneurship. She always had a flair for spotting opportunities and thinking outside the box. Whether it was selling homemade crafts or launching a small online venture, her passion for business was evident.
By Pepe Magic3 years ago in Critique
Nowhere Else to Stop
Edmund was a rising star, welcomed like a lost child by the film world. The papers were crazy over him like a dog with a new toy. There wasn’t much else a 21-year-old could wish for. He had the looks, the fame… and the MONEY! He sure had a heavy wallet. Who would’ve thought two movies in three years could get him where he was? Like the sun in the early hours of the day, Ed’s rise was inevitable.
By Josh E.3 years ago in Critique
Work
Consider yourself a "lazy" person but still want to start working from home, don't worry! There are steps you can take to overcome laziness and create a successful work-from-home routine. Here's how you can get started:
By Ilya KozinetS3 years ago in Critique
A Sapphic Story I wrote in 2008
Carol Patience sighed as her back was fixed against the purple sheets on the bed. The seventeen year old thought it was a very strange way to celebrate her birthday. Lying on her bed, semi naked whilst her girlfriend, was somewhere around the flat. Carol stood up and stared at herself at the rectangle shaped mirror on the wall. She certainly noticed that her changes from two years ago. Never would she have thought that she would have a girlfriend, around twice her age. Carol was fourteen when she first met Grace Butterfly, after being bit by a snake and found her self out of planet earth.
By Chloe Gilholy3 years ago in Critique