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The other Boleyn Girl
This story helps the reader fall in love with Mary Boleyn. In the beginning of the story Mary is a pawn for her family. She is Henry the eighth's mistress. In the end of the story she is married to a man who loves her. She leaves power maneuvering behind
By Antoinette L Brey3 years ago in Critique
Dracula
Genre-defining epistolary gothic novel that has been grossly misunderstood and bastardised repeatedly through various terrible to subpar to okay film and TV adaptions. It is not a romance novel; it is a horror novel about a greedy, bloodlust-driven monstrous vampire who is unapologetically evil. Avoid the films, read the book.
By Paul Stewart3 years ago in Critique
Days of Danger
A wild and colorful hot take on an oppressive system of governing in which drugs have made a world void of everything that is, at its core, freedom- creativity, natural happiness, self-expression- being taken down by vigilantes in a world built on secret codenames and an apocalyptic way of life.
By Lizzy Rose3 years ago in Critique
The Downward Spiral
An uncompromisingly raw, aggressive, and at times, beautiful musical exploration of a descent into self-destruction. There's either a hopeful or hopeless end to the tale, depending on how you interpret it. Given the autobiographical nature of Trent Reznor's work and its parallels with his life, I've always felt the hope.
By Paul Stewart3 years ago in Critique
Star Trek: Strange New Worlds – "Subspace Rhapsody"
Embracing musical theater, the episode combines heart, humor, quality vocals, and unique innovation. Through songs, it explores characters' deep emotions, intricate connections, and personal histories. The innovative storytelling and fresh approach highlight Strange New Worlds' strengths, leaving a lasting impression that intrigues viewers and invites more exploration within the series.
By Mark Randall Havens3 years ago in Critique
Draft: De-cluttering
*If you want to skip ahead to the part I want feedback on, scroll down to the header labeling the drafted poem below. Lately, I have been having trouble with endings. Starting poems or prose is the easy part. A line comes to me and often starts as a quick note in my phone. It's easy to run with it, but where do I stop and how?
By Kay Husnick3 years ago in Critique
Pirates of the Caribbean: The Curse of the Black Pearl has ruined the pirate genre for me
It was the first movie I remember seeing in theaters, and my admiration for its storytelling grows with age. It is the penultimate blend of action, wit, and mystery on the high seas.
By Stephen A. Roddewig3 years ago in Critique






