Winter is coming
temperature is falling
frost lies on golf course
Copyright © 1/15/2025 by Andrea O. Corwin
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Anxiety waves wash over me this December 31, 2024. In years past, there was excitement, or fatigue, waiting for Rocking New Year’s Eve and gastronomic juices flowing, thinking of our January 1st good luck dinner. This year’s end is an exclamation. I am now IT, the last one. When my mother died, the realization exploded in my brain that being the youngest conferred the unique experience of more loss. I would be the last to die, the survivor, my fate that of experiencing more loss. I reached it this year. Here it is. I have arrived. I have no one to ask about a forgotten or dim memory, no one to clarify confusion in the youngest's memories.
By Andrea Corwin about a year ago in Poets
Comments (14)
That is quite a distinct sight to behold! Lovely haiku, Andrea!
That's is unique haiku!
Thanks, John. Sports are weird - a year ago, they finished a complex with "Kitchens" in the name, and I thought, "GREAT! new restaurants!!" We were excited…and then found out that it is a pickleball term and it is a over 20 pickleball courts.
I love that you used the golfing term lie(s) for the frost (the lie of the golf ball). Sports are so weird!
A perfectly chilling haiku, Andrea!. We've had hard frosts here the past couple of days.
Ohhh, I love frost on the golf course, lovely words.
Exactly right, Andrea!! Ai generated a beautiful photo for this! Loved it 😻🌟
Winter is always coming.. Be it on little cat feet or huge lion paws.. lol. Lovely haiku
That was so wonderful! Loved your Haiku!
Oh, this is lovely. Well done.
This haiku is gorgeous✨. And the picture is super charming, too; it really adds to the overall aesthetic!
So beautiful! 🤩
Love your haiku!
Wonderful Haiku!