π₯πππ-π₯π ππ-π₯πππ-π₯π ππ-π₯πππ-π₯π ππ
Should I take that chance?
Risking everything I have
Sounds like a bad thought.
π₯πππ-π₯π ππ-π₯πππ-π₯π ππ-π₯πππ-π₯π ππ
But what if I won?
Should I really keep waiting
Till the day I die?
π₯πππ-π₯π ππ-π₯πππ-π₯π ππ-π₯πππ-π₯π ππ
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wow don't wait, just go for that goal, I hope it's something amazing.
Love your performance poem!!!β€οΈβ€οΈπ
Don't wait.....take that chance....nice job.
Nice job Anna! π π
Nike say "Just Do It".
Sure, go for it....but then again maybe not. I guess it depends on the risk vs the reward. Well done.
So thoughtful and on point
I guess it depends what you're risking βΊ
Many people would say that it's better to take the risk than regret later. But I don't agree. I'd only risk it if I know for sure that it's gonna be a good outcome. I hope you manage to sort your dilemma. Sending you lots of love and hugs β€οΈ
Tic toc says the clock. Time waits for no one but we wait for time. Brilliant poem
Itβs so hard to take the big Risks when the potential rewards are great but the risks are terrifying! Your poem evokes that conundrum well, Anna!
clever!
Waiting around for a poor relationship to improve can be a really long wait. Well said.