Underground
More Dark Poetry

This is a dark poem for Dharrsheena . It is not how I feel. So here are my words. The music is "Underground" by Tom Waits.
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In This Place, There Is not Any Light
Total Darkness, In The Cloak Of Night
This Is Where You Cannot Hear a Sound
You Are Here Forever Underground
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The Absence Of Sense, You Cannot Tell
Where You Are, Youβre In A Living Hell
There Is No Escape, Buried Alive
Under The Ground, You Will Not Survive
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Premature Burial, No Escape
Unable To Move, You Lie And Wait
And Then A Black Snake Twists Around You
The Dark Wet Soil Will Cave In Soon
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You Are Dying In The Serpentβs Coil
Suffocation, Your Lungs Filed With Soil
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Very dark, and very well done.
Your work never disappoints.
Millions and millions of thanks for this poem! π Loved every line of it, it can be interpreted metaphorically and also literally. And you always pack a punch at the ending. 'You Are Dying In The Serpentβs Coil. Suffocation, Your Lungs Filed With Soil'. Such a beautiful string of words. It's super dark and I absolutely loved it! π
This really spoke to me today. Really good piece.