There Is A Darkness
A Dark Sedoka. Also My forty-seventh dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena
This is my third attempt at a Sedoka (shadow poetry), a poetic form introduced to me by Loryne Andawey and you can read the definition here.
I also found a confirming article here
This is my forty-seventh dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena.
The Sedoka Format is very short taking the form of a pair of katauta as a single poem, which can address the same subject from differing perspectives.
The music is "There Is A Darkness" by Bonnie "Prince" Billie
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There Is A Darkness
And That Will Soon Take Your Soul
And Leave A Rotting Carcass
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Your Flesh Will Be Stripped
You Are Blind In The Darkness
A Flayed Corpse On The Cold Slab
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Comments (6)
Creepy feels like Halloween!!! Wonderfully written!!!โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐
I love a bit of darkness. This was brilliant! ๐ค
That's spooky and really well done.
Excellent work... Very well done!!!
This was sooooo fantastic! Loved this Sedoka!
Ahhh! Chills! So creepy! You're inspiring me to write darker verses. Well done ๐ค