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The Omission of Verse 21

It was not a failure of literacy, but a choice of power.

By Caitlin CharltonPublished about an hour ago Updated 3 minutes ago 1 min read
The Omission of Verse 21
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I. No man is permitted to

assume a position or to

domineer.

Those who are quiet and

demur with fear.

He shall not soak up a

position without

accountability; in the

absence of truth he must be

quiet.

*

II. That much is clear.

Regarding the omission of

verse 21: The one way street

is hereby declared a dead end.

Not the start of a revolution.

*

III. You cannot submit to

yourself, you must submit to

women.

It was not a failure of literacy

that they leaned on the

choice of power.

*

IV. They had no head

No hair.

No one to worship but a

sneer.

*

I still haven’t washed my hair and the dumbbell is cold in the corner.

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  • Harper Lewis14 minutes ago

    I’m coming back for a close read when I get to work. But really quick, a technical note about the challenge is one line, and they consider your last line as three lines because of the line breaks. Not sure, but I would give that some thought. 💖

  • Lana V Lynx36 minutes ago

    That unnecessary line is too funny, Caitlin! Great poem!

  • Imola Tóthabout an hour ago

    I don't know what's going on, but I love the randomness of the last sentence.

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