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The Echo of Alone

A Journey Through the Heart’s Silent Corners

By Sazia Afreen SumiPublished about a year ago 2 min read
The Echo of Alone
Photo by Elijah Hiett on Unsplash

In a crowded room where laughter spills,

Voices echo, yet the silence chills.

A smile painted on faces, bright and bold,

But deep within, a story goes untold.

Oh, loneliness, with your shroud of gray,

You creep in softly, then refuse to sway.

It clings like shadows, at dusk it appears,

A quiet companion, fed by unseen fears.

Footsteps whisper on empty streets,

Mixed feelings dance with the risers and retreats.

While the world spins on with vibrant delight,

I'm fishing for comfort in the fading light.

I scroll through the faces, touch screens with care,

Connected but distant—oh, how it's unfair!

Like a ghost in the crowd, I drift and I sigh,

Yearning for warmth, as time passes by.

In cafes and corners, I sip my cold tea,

A stranger’s gaze catches, but never sees me.

Between every sip, there's a hidden ache,

A solitude drowning in the choices we make.

But maybe there’s magic in the heart's deep beat,

A longing for connection, a search for the sweet.

So I’ll wear my loneliness like a threadbare cloak,

Boldly stitched with the words that I spoke.

Every tear holds a story—were they meant to fall?

Each one a whisper that longs to enthrall.

In the quietest moments, when the world feels too wide,

I’ll cradle the silence, let it be my guide.

For in every heartbeat is a rhythm of hope,

In every dark valley, we learn how to cope.

Though loneliness lingers like mist on the sea,

There’s power in knowing it’s part of being free.

A park bench invites me to sit and reflect,

The rustle of leaves has a gentle effect.

A child’s laughter dances on the evening air,

In that fleeting moment, I feel like I’m there.

So I’ll breathe in the stillness, embrace my own space,

Each sigh is a chance for a new kind of grace.

I’ll write down my dreams and set them afloat,

With courage in words, I’ll craft my boat.

And if you feel lonely, know there’s beauty to find,

In the cracks and the shadows where Love is intertwined.

We’re all on a journey, seeking to understand,

That the echo of solitude can guide us to unity.

So reach out, connect, and let kindness ring,

In the symphony of life, together we sing.

Let’s share our stories, let’s dance through the night,

For the echo of solitude ultimately finds the light.

sad poetryStream of Consciousness

About the Creator

Sazia Afreen Sumi

I craft stories that delve into love's many facets—romantic, unrequited, and lasting—plus other intriguing themes. Discover tales that resonate!

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  • Soma Ahmedabout a year ago

    Good.

  • Raushan Miraabout a year ago

    Nice.

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