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Summer night

With Him...

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 5 years ago โ€ข Updated 4 years ago โ€ข 1 min read
Blushing ๐Ÿ˜Š

Like a warm breeze,

You Brushed up Against my Heart โ™ฅ๏ธ

I had Butterflies ๐Ÿฆ‹ from the Thought of you!!

The Smell of Barbecue ๐Ÿ–

And the Taste of the Sun...

Just Reminiscing of sum Summertime Fun!

Transforming Time to a Snail ๐ŸŒ the Moment I Met You...

Like a Slumber Party and Pjโ€™s

We came Together.

Like Ice-cream ๐Ÿฆ and a Cone, I Melted into you!

The way I Felt stood out

Like a Cool Night with a Misty Moon ๐ŸŒš

Iโ€™ll never forget that June;

Like Fireflies luminating โ€œlightโ€

Flying high by Yourside

Lost in the Night โ€ฆ

๐ŸŒŸ Starlight and โœจ stars are Bright

You only live one life.

Thatโ€™s what my conscious

Kept telling me as I Layed on the

Rooftop with him,

That Summernight.

nature poetry

About the Creator

HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

โ€œ Public Diary, of an Urban LGBTQ Poet

๐ŸŽ‰I am an Actor, Model, Writer, and Entrepreneur โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ™

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  • Babs Iverson4 years ago

    Re-read! ๐Ÿ’– previously!!!๐Ÿ’•

  • Gerald Holmes4 years ago

    Very well done. You have a way with words.

  • Excellent imagery in this poem

  • What a great poem. Thanks for sharing it with us. I really enjoyed it.

  • Oh so beautiful!!!

  • Thank you for another heartfelt poem.

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