Summer night
With Him...

Like a warm breeze,
You Brushed up Against my Heart โฅ๏ธ
I had Butterflies ๐ฆ from the Thought of you!!
The Smell of Barbecue ๐
And the Taste of the Sun...
Just Reminiscing of sum Summertime Fun!
Transforming Time to a Snail ๐ the Moment I Met You...
Like a Slumber Party and Pjโs
We came Together.
Like Ice-cream ๐ฆ and a Cone, I Melted into you!
The way I Felt stood out
Like a Cool Night with a Misty Moon ๐
Iโll never forget that June;
Like Fireflies luminating โlightโ
Flying high by Yourside
Lost in the Night โฆ
๐ Starlight and โจ stars are Bright
You only live one life.
Thatโs what my conscious
Kept telling me as I Layed on the
Rooftop with him,
That Summernight.
About the Creator
HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
โ Public Diary, of an Urban LGBTQ Poet
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Comments (6)
Re-read! ๐ previously!!!๐
Very well done. You have a way with words.
Excellent imagery in this poem
What a great poem. Thanks for sharing it with us. I really enjoyed it.
Oh so beautiful!!!
Thank you for another heartfelt poem.