Suffocation
My forty-fifth dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena
This is my forty-fifth dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena.
I'll go again with the villanelle form for this one (I did for forty-four)
This developed into an ecologically themed poem so the music I have chosen is "Beds Are Burning" by Midnight Oil from the album "Diesel and Dust". We need politicians like Peter Garrett
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The Atmosphere Degenerates
One Day There'll Be No Air To Breathe
And Then We All Will Suffocate
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Fossil Fuels Accelerate
The Burning Of Earth By Degrees
The Atmosphere Degenerates
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We Need To Fight Conglomerates
The Atmosphere Will Be Diseased
And Then We All Will Suffocate
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Suffocation, A Petrol State
ThePapers Say Do Not Believe
The Atmosphere Degenerates
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You Can't Breathe Money, You Can't Wait
Carbon Dioxide Atmosphere
And Then We All Will Suffocate
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If We Don't Take Control, My Mates
We All Will Die, It's Plain To See
The Atmosphere Degenerates
And Then We All Will Suffocate
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Introduction I took the Fairport song about pirates and pressgangs and a sailors love waiting for his return and I wanted to weave the concept with my wonderful Muse who is an ocean and more away, so she is my own "Polly on the Shore"
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Important and powerfully done. Kudos!
Thank you for showing me what a villanelle poem looks like! And you used it quite effectively. Well done :)
Whoaaa, this was soooo scary because the chances of this happening is super high! Brilliant poem!
Awesome!
Very well written keep up the good work
Splendid beat!!! It reads like lyrics to your dark song!!! Left a heart!!!