Her starving cats fought
The big one ate from her corpse
The little one, the crib
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This is the haiku adaptation of a two sentence horror I wrote a while back :)
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Sam Spinelli
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After the Storm
After the storm of winter snow there sat a small bear by the name Ted, of course. He loves the snow and likes to roll around in it making all sorts of trails and whatever he has a mind to do. He wondered where all the people are, but in a way, he is hoping that they are all snug in the homes maybe drinking hot chocolate-one of his favorite drinks with mini-marshmallows and eating something homemade for he likes this winter wonderland all to himself to romp and play and maybe even catch some fish down by the river.
By Mark Graham7 days ago in Fiction
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Okay my mind was blown by this one. So much so I read it a few more times. I can’t get over the last line. The wind is angry outside my window at the moment and that made this all the more chilling. Thank goodness the hubby isn't sleepy yet so I am not totally alone. I also got scratched by a cat some months ago, I promise I did nothing, I was innocent. So reading this was terrifying especially for me ♥️🤗
Oh good lord, it doesn't take much to make true horror.
Shivers!