Everything turns into dark for a moment today
Cosmic phenomenon is only minutes away.
Luminosity strikes, then disappears,
Increasing tension enhances our fears.
People are impatient, don't want to miss the chance,
Seeing this special event, two orbs' graceful dance.
Eclipse of the century now finally makes sense.
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Comments (9)
Increasing tension enhances our fears. Nicely done!!
I like how this one has a positive take on the eclipse that isn't too heavy, but rather a reflection of what it's like to anticipate and watch one! "Seeing this special event, two orbs' graceful dance."- great line Anna:)
Eclipse wow! I haven't tried to write an acrostic poem but this gave me a stimulation. Fitspirational !!!
Oh this is great. And like Dharr, that line "Two orbs' graceful dance" is such a fine way to describe it. Well done, Anna!
Two orbs' graceful dance, I really loved that! Such a wonderful poem!
Great job!!!
Excellent work 🫶🏻
This was an acrostic set as a perfect example of mastering one's skills. Excellent piece!
Love it! Beautifully executed acrostic!