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Streaks of brilliant light
Pierce holes in the night-time mist
Eerie Shadows cast
About the Creator
JBaz
I have enjoyed writing for most of my life, never professionally.
I wish to now share my stories with others, lets see where it goes.
Born and raised on the Canadian Prairies, I currently reside on the West Coast. I call both places home.
Comments (16)
Beautifully done!
Wonderful word picture you've painted!
Read your haiku several times. It's beautiful.
This created such a strong atmosphere. Very well done!
well written
I love how intense and vivid the imagery you created in the haiku is!! Great work Jason!!
Such a rich collection of words, concisely telling the story of a sublime moment.
This was lovely.
Oooo, this was absolutely magnificent! Loved your poem!
Of all the sky phenomenon to write about its hard to beat lightning and even harder to evoke it. Really well done, Jason! I could feel the sizzle in the electrified atmosphere!
Simply beautiful work.
Gorgeous haiku!
Excellent writing!
Such a perfect pairing! Well done :)
oh this is brilliant, sir! love it! quick edity thing- should erie be eerie?
A perfect setting for moonlight