Scorch the land or not
The liquid flame lies patient
Ever biding time
How does it work?
powerful piece. Well done.
Wonderful symbolism.
I love this one! The mountain’s personality really comes through.
Ooh, a volcano! Great idea. :) Love this line: "The liquid flame lies patient" Great work :)
I can imagine the liquid flame bubbling, beautiful!
Love it! Love the strength. :)
Great work! I love the idea of the volcano. Very well done :)
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powerful piece. Well done.
Wonderful symbolism.
I love this one! The mountain’s personality really comes through.
Ooh, a volcano! Great idea. :) Love this line: "The liquid flame lies patient" Great work :)
I can imagine the liquid flame bubbling, beautiful!
Love it! Love the strength. :)
Great work! I love the idea of the volcano. Very well done :)