Please don't...
Please don't give up,
don't give yourself to the shadows,
swim and swim to the surface.
At the surface where you can breathe again,
there you will find the light, and the body will be at peace.
Please don't give up on your shadows,
that love to hug and strangle you to death.
Swim and swim to the surface.
Yes, there on the surface.
Please don't give up on yourself.
WE NEED YOU...
I NEED YOU...
Will be there as soon as I can...
walking, running, jumping, swimming, and flying...
Coming to take care of you.
PLEASE DON'T GIVE UP!
Fight the demons and make them go away.
They should not dare to be in your way.
PLEASE DON'T...
SWIM TO THE SURFACE...
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Ina Zeneli
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After the Storm
After the storm of winter snow there sat a small bear by the name Ted, of course. He loves the snow and likes to roll around in it making all sorts of trails and whatever he has a mind to do. He wondered where all the people are, but in a way, he is hoping that they are all snug in the homes maybe drinking hot chocolate-one of his favorite drinks with mini-marshmallows and eating something homemade for he likes this winter wonderland all to himself to romp and play and maybe even catch some fish down by the river.
By Mark Graham5 days ago in Fiction
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We need more! This is Powerful. Thank you for writing!
The metaphor of swimming to the surface symbolizes the struggle to overcome inner demons and find peace. It serves as a reminder of the importance of resilience and the transformative power of seeking help, thank you very much for sharing, love your works, hope to read more, subscribed.
love how you keep repeating the line: SWIM TO THE SURFACE... it creates an amazing rythem!