Paul And Samantha's Final Romantic Chapter (Edited For Television)
Inspired And Submitted To The Unnecessary Line Challenge

‘Paul, what did you do?’
In the crystal placid lake pool
Sammy feels, such the fool
While Paul, your acting cool
Dancing with friends
When
Feelings need to mend
Hope you comprehend
Samantha, all alone
Staying sober, not stoned
You, Paul on the other hand
Taking a stand
Trying to be such the man
Playing in a fantasy sorority house band
Whose drummer soon will arrive
Only to be the one scripted to die
Swimming in the wakeless, campground lie
Cueing audience, scream and cry
Asking why
Jason performs such murderous tasks
Against most of the theatrical cast
Only trying to enjoy a sexy pass
May I inquire?
Discussing by the romantic fire
In this poetic effort
Which line should be deleted to get her
Sleeping in an inflated raft
Allowing all of us a good, stimulated laugh
“Paul what did you do?”
Is the deadly dialogue that is through
"I love you”
Samantha can express
Hearing Paul’s confess
On Valentines Day
When underground Canadians say
Everything goes ‘the miner's bloody way’
About the Creator
Marc OBrien
Barry University graduate Marc O'Brien has returned to Florida after a 17 year author residency in Las Vegas. He will continue using fiction as a way to distribute information. Books include "The Final Fence: Sophomores In The Saddle"


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