Our Drought
An Inspirational Cinquain
This is for Poppy's #10 Prompt and Mikeydred's Octoberon Challenge.
The human condition explains the questionable state of many things - climate change, war, and even ourselves.
We do create a drought, but whether the rain that follows is one of reckoning, or reprieve, is up to us.
Enjoy this cinquain.
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Parched soil,
below dry skies,
hollers where rivers ran,
a thirst, empty, so relentless,
recalls.
Dry lips,
uttered of rainβs revenge,
but the sky scoffed, drainedβ
we grew Drought, then
Rain came.
About the Creator
Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin
Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.
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Comments (5)
Vivid imageryβ¦ I especially like: βParched soil, below dry skies, hollers where rivers ranββ
Nicely done!
This was extremely powerful! Loved this so much!
Yes, indeed we are so careless with our only home. As if we have a Planet B to relocate to when the Earth becomes uninhabitable. Great poem, Michelle!
This is a very interesting and thoughtful poem with multiple layers to it. On the surface, it seems to just be about a drought and the relief rain brings, but beneath that, it is also about how bad thingsβour βdry spellsββeventually come to an end when it βrainsβ. Well done.