My Darling!
I want you to know how I really feel
My Darling,
I'm afraid I'll have to be brief.
Recently, a Vocal contest was released
A poetic opportunity
To profess my feelings towards thee
But there's a limit, you see
Fifty words, exactly
To say what I need.
So without any further ado,
Allow me to say how much I--
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Comments (4)
Oops, word limit reached hahahahaha. Loved this!
Beautiful and very thought out. Love this.
you have done a spectacular job in this piece. Its so beautiful yet clever. very nice. I loved it.
Aww, this is so sweet and clever! You’ve packed so much love into just fifty words—impressive and heartwarming. Your darling is lucky to have such poetic affection!