Everything’s shady except for you...
How do you stand there in the darkness, and still shine through?
you have seen me unbalanced, yet you still watch my life...
I stay up late just to see you again.
I want you to teach me how to face the twilight, and still, shine bright...
Lucky you are, to constantly Party with the stars...
As a child, I watched you Never Go Far...
Maybe change your Shade but never your Texture...
Now and then you appear as a Crescent...
I speak to you but I wonder if you get my Message 💬
High up in the sky, you watch everyone Pass by...
I wonder if you've met the Sun?
Did you know that You guys Both share the sky?
I would come to visit if I could Fly...
One day I'll Grasp,
The White Snowball Stuck in the sky at Night!
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I love your use of contrast to relay strong feelings. Truly beautiful
Let me know when you go- I’ll tag along
Very mesmerizing!
So beautiful! Amazing work!
this is a wonderful piece. Love it.
Beautiful 💕💖😊
Love it
Supercute!!!!
Great symbolism with a hint of nostalgia and romanticism. Well done!!!